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Pacific Northwest Writers Association Northwest April 2006 April 2006 CONFERENCE SPEAKER CLOSE-UPS Mercedes Lackey Contents Conference Speaker Close-ups ........................... 1 Mercedes Lackey........... 1 James Rollins ................... 1 Conference Preview ......... 2 Agents ............................. 2 Editors ............................. 4 Conference Bonus ............. 4 Agent/Editor Request ....... 5 Member News ................... 5 Upcoming Events ............... 6 Message from the President ............................. 6 Writer’s Experience ............ 6 It’s A Journey!.................. 6 Conference Registration Form .................................... 7 Genre Close-up ................. 8 Playwriting vs. Fiction Writing .............................. 8 Member News ................... 8 Our Honored Guest Speaker at the 2006 PNWA Summer Conference Mercedes Lackey, author of over 150 published stories, entered this world on June 24, 1950, in Chicago, had a normal childhood and graduated from Purdue University in 1972. During the late 70’s she worked as an artist’s model and then went into the computer programming field, ending up with American Airlines in Tulsa, Oklahoma. In addition to her fantasy writing, she has written lyrics for and recorded nearly fifty songs for Firebird Arts & Music, a small recording company specializing in science fiction folk music. “I’m a storyteller; that’s what I see as `my job.’ My stories come out of my characters; how those characters would react to the given situation. Maybe that’s why I get letters from readers as young as thirteen and as old as sixty-odd. I began writing out of boredom; I continue out of addiction. I can’t `not’ write, and as a result I have no social life! I began writing fantasy because I love it, but I try to construct my fantasy worlds with all the care of a `high-tech’ science fiction writer. I apply the principle of TANSTAAFL (`There ain’t no such thing as free lunch’, credited to Robert Heinlein). I try to make all of my characters, even the `evil magicians,’ something more than flat stereotypes. Even evil magicians get up in the night and look for cookies, sometimes. I suppose that in everything I write I try to expound the creed I gave my character Diana Tregarde in Burning Water: “There’s no such thing as `one, true way’; the only answers worth having are the ones you find for yourself; leave the world better than you found it. Love, freedom, and the chance to do some good -- they’re the things worth living and dying for, and if you aren’t willing to die for the things worth living for, you might as well turn in your membership in the human race.” James Rollins Guest Speaker at the 2006 PNWA Summer Conference James Rollins is a thrilling adventure writer. Publisher’s Weekly recently quoted, “While Clive Cussler maintains the gold standard in action... Rollins has a firm grasp on the silver.” Our board member, Jeff Ayers, asked James the following questions; How do you go about the writing process? “I like this question. I think every writer needs to find their own rituals and habits. My first adage is that I write every day. As to where I write, I mostly use my office at home, but I write exclusively on a laptop Macintosh so I can grab the computer and move. I’ll often shift to another place in the house if I’m feeling stuck. Or take my laptop and run off somewhere. I’ve often solved problems in my story by simply changing the scenery around me.” What advice do you have for beginning writers? “That’s easy: READ! The best teacher of the craft is simply a good book. As you write and struggle with difficulties in your own writing, each book you read can teach you aspects of the craft. Why re-invent the wheel, when you can learn by example? Also, as someone who was rejected by 50 different agencies before hooking one, I must stress the word PERSISTENCE. Believe in your work, keep sending it out, but more importantly, don’t stop writing. Move onto a new project. Don’t keep revising the same book unless an agent or editor asks you to. Keep doing this and eventually you will get published!” James Rollins latest book, Map of Bones, concerns the theft of the Bones of the Magi. Page 1 April 2006 NEWSLETTER CONFERENCE PREVIEW Elizabeth Atteberry Agents Editor Loren Fairman Assistant Editor BOARD OF TRUSTEES Pam Binder President, Conference Co-Chair Andrew Stoute Vice President, TWIO/TBIO Chair, Volunteer Coordinator Sandy McCormack Secretary, Treasurer, Literary Contest Co-Chair Melissa Morse Member-at-Large Jeff Ayers Conference Co-Chair Sam Boush Marketing, TWIO Melanie Grimes Nominations and New Membership Terry Persun Conference Advisor, Marketing Danielle Rollins E-Notes Editor, Literary Contest Co-Chair Kate van Gelder Conference Co-chair, Marketing OFF-BOARD COMMITTEES & ADVISORS Elizabeth Atteberry Northwest Ink Gloria Campbell The Publishing Institute, Bellevue Community College Bob Dugoni Agent & Editor Chair Jennifer McCord Jennifer McCord & Assoc. Past PNWA President Deborah Schneider Public Programming Coordinator, King County Library System Page 2 LAUREN ABRAMO joined DGLM over a year ago after earning an M.A. in Irish Studies at the National University of Ireland, Galway. She is an avid reader of fiction, especially anything literary, smart and fun, as well as nonfiction designed to make you think or laugh—particularly history, politics, Lauren Abramo current affairs and philosophy. She also enjoys books on science. STEPHEN BARBARA is an agent and contracts director at the Donald Maass Literary Agency. He was a junior agent at the Fifi Oscard Agency, an editorial assistant at Regan Books, and an intern at the Kaplan Agency. He enjoys literary fiction, YA and middle grade novels, narrative non-fiction, historical Stephen Barbara and topical non-fiction, and a variety of commercial fiction genres. LORETTA A. BARRETT, president of Loretta Barrett Books, Inc., is a member of AAR, and has representation in every major foreign market, East and West. Nonfiction interests: psychology, science/technology, spirituality, current events, biography and memoir. She represents New York Times bestsellers SympLorretta Barrett toms of Withdrawal, by Christopher Kennedy Lawford; and Mother Angelica, by Raymond Arroyo, and national bestseller The Singularity is Near by Ray Kurzweil. Fiction interests: mainstream and contemporary; women’s fiction and thrillers. She represents New York Times bestseller Cold Truth, by Mariah Stewart, and national bestseller The Lake of Dead Languages, by Carol Goodman. For clients and submissions guidelines, visit lorettabarrettbooks.com. JENNIFER CAYEA is literary agent and foreign right’s director of Nicholas Ellison, Inc. Her recent projects include Here, There and Everywhere (Gotham Books); Real Life, Real Love (Berkley) by world renown spiritual leader Father Albert/Cutie; and The Girl from Charnelle (William Morrow) by K. L. Cook. She is Jennifer Cayea looking for literary and upmarket fiction; literary thriller; Latino/Hispanic fiction and non-fiction; young adult, memoir, narrative non-fiction; self-help and is desperate to represent a baseball book FARLEY CHASE began at Minnesota’s Graywolf Press, then the New Yorker magazine, The New Press, Talk magazine and was associate editor at Miramax Books. He was an agent with Goldfarb & Associates and now The Waxman Literary Agency. He is looking for original and enduring non-fiction projects in journalFarley Chase ism, history, memoir, biography, and prescriptive non-fiction with an emphasis in narratives and subjects that range from current and military affairs, popular science, business, humor, pop culture, and sports. ARIELLE ECKSTUT is a literary agent who runs the West Coast office of the Levine Greenberg Literary Agency. She is also the co-author of three books including, Putting Your Passion into Print (Workman, 2005) and Pride & Promiscuity: The Lost Sex Scenes of Jane Austen (Simon & Schuster, 2001). Arielle Eckstut Arielle’s clients include New York Times bestselling author, Larry Dossey; Bellwether Awardwinner, Gayle Brandeis; James Beard Award-winners, Laura Schenone and Georgeanne Brennan; While You Were Out star, Mark Montano; and numerous others. Before she became an agent, Arielle baked for Madonna, performed improvisational comedy at the Edinburgh Theater Festival Fringe, and cut karyotypes. CATHERINE FOWLER has more than 20 years of experience in book and Internet publishing having held senior positions for such prestigious companies as Random House, Simon & Schuster, Doubleday, Excite and WebMD. With Redwood Agency, Fowler is focusing on the core of her expertise and her pasCathrine Fowler sion: the development of high-quality projects, working with talented writers and editors, and negotiating contracts. Areas of interest include health, food and cooking, popular culture, women’s interests, narrative nonfiction, nature, parenting, aging, general reference, relationships, popular psychology, non-fiction “chick lit”, business, humor, lifestyle, cultural technology, quirky projects, memoir and the occasional novel. MICHELLE GRAJKOWSKI began 3 Seas Literary Agency in 2000. Since then, she’s sold over 200 titles to major publishing houses including Harlequin, NAL, Berkley, Dorchester, Kensington, Avon, Pocket, Random House, Knopf, Andrews McMeel, Warner and HarperCollins. She is looking for fantastic authors with a voice of their own. She focuses Michelle Grajkowski on romance (including category), ChickLit, young adult, children’s stories, female-focused fantasy, paranormal, women’s fiction, historicals, regencies, westerns, romantic suspense, mysteries and thrillers. She also represents select non-fiction and other fiction projects. KELLY HARMS is seeking all types of commercial fiction especially for the women’s market. She is new to the agent game, came from editorial but so far have authors writing mystery, suspense, romanitic suspense and women’s fiction, and one very sexy gang of vampires. she’d really like to have more thrillers and character driven mysteries and really smart, but not quite “literary” women’s fiction is her favorite. April 2006 CONFERENCE PREVIEW Agents (continued) JEFF KLEINMAN is a literary agent and intellectual property attorney with Folio Literary Management, LLC, which works with all of the major U.S. publishers (and, through subagents, with most international publishers). Jeff ’s authors include Robert Jeff Kleinman Hicks, Ron McLarty, Yolanda King, Philip Gerard, and Barbara Holland. Nonfiction: narrative nonfiction with a historical bent, but also memoir, health, parenting, aging, nature, pets, how-to, nature, science, politics, military, espionage, equestrian, biography. Fiction: very well-written, character-driven novels; some suspense, thrillers; otherwise mainstream commercial and literary fiction. No: children’s, romance, mysteries, westerns, poetry, or screenplays, novels about serial killers, suicide, or children in peril (kidnapped, killed, raped, etc.). MAURA KYE-CASELLA works at The Denise Marcil Literary Agency, Inc., which represents a wide variety of fiction and non-fiction. Titles range from award-winning crime novels to best-selling women’s fiction to parenting and business titles. Maura is looking for commercial and literary fiction (including chick-lit, thrillers, paranormals, women’s fiction and multicultural novels) and is seeking memoirs, pop culture, adventure, cookbooks and food related writings, lifestyle, humor, parenting and self-help titles. Maura’s recent books include Lost In The Amazon (W Publishing) by Stephen & Marlo Carter Kirkpatrick, Darn Good Advice Babies/Parenting (Barrons) by Jan Faull and Once Upon A Wedding Night (Avon/HarperCollins) by Sophie Jordan. BYRD LEAVELL worked at Carlisle & Company and served as an agent at InkWell Management and Venture Literary. His clients include The Modern Drunkard, Tucker Max, and The Phat Phree. He specializes in books that attempt to push the publishing enByrd Leavell velope to reach new audiences. Byrd lives for working with authors on books that attempt to reach undiscovered audiences— whether that book is about cleaning up dead bodies, drinking seven nights a week, or church camp. It’s all about taking a great idea and then working together to turn it into something that people want to read—twice. He loves writing that makes an impact and the work he represent covers a broad spectrum, from nimble, intelligent literary fiction like Euny Hong’s My Blue Blood, to Tucker Max’s blistering I Hope They Serve Beer in Hell, and Erik Barmack and Max Handelman’s genre-defining Why Fantasy Football Matters. JANDY NELSON is a Senior Literary Agent with Manus & Associates Literary Agency, Inc. Jandy has a varied list of nonfiction including nonfiction, innovative self-help, memoirs, health and a fiction list which includes literary fiction, multicultural Jandy Nelson fiction and women’s fiction. She sells a significant portion of her clients’ work into the television and feature film markets. SUSAN ANN PROTTER has worked in publishing for three decades. She worked at Harper & Row (now HarperCollins) as associate director of subsidiary rights and as a consultant to Addison-Wesley before becoming an agent. She has handled a variety Susan Protter of books including the best sellers Getting Organzied and The Organized Executive by Stephanie Winston, The House Of God By Samuel Shem and The Plantation by George McNeill as well as the works of mystery writer Lydia Adamson: the Alice Nestleton series beginning with A Cat In The Manger, the Dr. Nightingale series and the new Lucy Wayles series. She is the agent for Fury On Earth: The Biography of Wilhelm Reich, Waldheim: The Missing Years by Robert Edwin Herzstein and Inside The Mirage: America’s Fragile Partnership with Saudi Arabia by Thomas W. Lippman. She represents a number of prominent award winning science fiction writers and editors such as Ian R. MacLeod, John G. Cramer, Patrick O’Leary, Rudy Rucker, Kathryn Cramer and David G. Hartwell. RITA ROSENKRANZ founded Rita Rosenkranz Literary Agency in 1990. Her adult non-fiction list stretches from the decorative—Flowers, White House Style: More Than 125 Arrangements by the Former White House Chief Floral Decorator by Dottie Temple and Rita Rosenkranz Stan Finegold to the dark—Saving Beauty From The Beast: How to Protect Your Daughter from an Unhealthy Relationship by Vicki Crompton and Ellen Zelda Kessner (Books for a Better Life Award, 2003). Other titles include Forbidden Fruit: Love Stories from the Underground Railroad by Betty DeRamus (essence.com bestseller); Olive Trees And Honey: A Treasury of Vegetarian Recipes from Jewish Communities Around the World by Gil Marks (2005 James Beard Award winner). She represents health, history, parenting, music, howto, popular science, business, biography, popular reference, cooking, spirituality, and general interest titles. Rita works with major publishing houses, as well as regional publishers that handle niche markets. She looks for projects that present familiar subjects freshly or less-known subjects presented commercially. Meg Ruley MEG RULEY joined the Jane Rotrosen Agency in 1981. The agency represents authors of commercial fiction, many of whom hail from the Pacific Northwest. She loves carrying heavy manuscripts in and out of Manhattan and hopes you will send her yours. ANN TOBIAS is both a children’s book editor and literary agent. She heads A Literary Agency for Children’s Books, which was established in 1988 in Washington, D.C., and is now located in New York City. As an agent, she represents authors and artists of Ann Tobias books for children of all ages-from infancy through adolescence—picture books, mid level novels, young adult fiction, and selected nonfiction and poetry. Ann is also the Executive Editor of Handprint Books, a start-up children’s book publishing company in the Park Slope neighborhood of Brooklyn, New York. Handprint Books specializes in picture books but has begun adding novels for the mid-level reader to its list as well. JOE VELTRE of Artists Literary Group, LLC in New York, has a background in literary representation, including book and film properties, as well as in editorial and foreign rights. ALG represents clients and projects in a variety of areas including commercial and literary Joe Veltre fiction, genre fiction, mysteries and romance titles, general and narrative non-fiction, including biographies, academic and popular history, business, health and how-to-titles. ALICE VOLPE has worked in book publishing for the last 30 years. She has worked at Macmillan, Harcourt Brace, and Time-Life, as well as in Tokyo, Japan for Time Life Books, Kodansha International, Harper, Britannica and Grolier. She has held the positions of book Alice Volpe publicist, staff writer, editor and publisher, and opened Northwest Literary Agency (Northwestl@aol.com) in the 1980’s to help bridge the chasm between lone author and remote, corporate publisher. Her clients include J.A. Jance, Carola Dunn, Judith Smith-Levin, J. Carson Black, Lee Lofland, Jeffrey Layton and many others. Page 3 April 2006 CONFERENCE BONUS The first 150 people who register for the conference will be guaranteed one additional agent appointment. This year we have invited additional agents and editors to our conference. Our goal is to give you more chances to make your dreams of becoming a published author come true. In years past you have had the opportunity to sign up for one agent appointment and one editor appointment. This year we are giving you a bonus opportunity. For those who sign up early, you will be guaranteed two agent appointments in addition to the one editor appointment. Your chances of getting published have just increased. Don’t miss this Early Bird Bonus Opportunity. The earlier you sign up—the better your chances of getting your first choice. AWARDS NOMINATIONS Each year we give out the following awards during our Awards Ceremony at our summer conference. If you know someone who you would like to honor, please email us at pnwa@pnwa.org and mark it “2006 Awards Nomination”. PNWA Open Book Award This award is for encouraging the development of writers in the Pacific Northwest and for their generous support of the PNWA Conference. (In the past this award has been given to book stores and individuals in the publishing community). PNWA Achievement Award This award is for distinguished professional achievement and for enhancing the stature of NW literature. (In the past this award has been given to published authors who exemplify hard word and dedication to their craft). PNWA Zola Helen Ross Founders Award This award is given in recognition of extraordinary service as a volunteer for PNWA. Page 4 CONFERENCE PREVIEW Editors COLIN FOX has worked at Warner Books for nearly six years, editing both fiction and nonfiction. His list of novelists includes such folks as the Pacific Northwest’s very own Robert Dugoni, along with David Baldacci, Brian Haig and Donald E. Westlake. On the nonfiction side, Colin has edited Billy Crystal, Lou Dobbs, Tucker Carlson, Henry Louis Gates, the family of Terri Colin Fox Schiavo, comedian David Cross and country star Gretchen Wilson. His primary areas of interest include commercial fiction, politics, current events, gambling, narrative nonfiction, pop culture, sports, business and humor. LIZ GORINSKY, editor Tor Books. Tor Books, an imprint of Tom Doherty Associates, LLC, is a New York-based publisher of hardcover and softcover books, founded in 1980 and committed (although not limited) to SF and fantasy literature. Between our extensive hardcover and trade-softcover line, our Orb backlist program, and our strongLiz Gorinsky hold in mass-market paperback, we annually publish what is arguable the largest and most diverse line of SF and fantasy ever produced by a single English-language publisher. Books from Tor have won every major award in the SF and fantasy fields, and for the last fifteen years in a row we have been named Best Publisher in the Locus Poll, the largest consumer poll in SF. RAELENE GORLINSKY, Managing Editor, Ellora’s Cave Publishing Inc. If you write erotic romance, Ellora’s Cave is the place to be. Currently the only e-publisher recognized by the Romance Writers of America, our site receives over 50,000 hits daily and average sales of over 30,000 books per month. Our readership continues to grow by the thousand, and our reputation within the e-publishing community is flawless. Ellor’s Cave is always open to new submissions of erotic romances. David Moldawer DAVID MOLDAWER is an editorial assistant at Riverhead Books, an imprint of Penguin Group (USA). David is looking to acquire nonfiction books on pop culture, science, technology, the internet, and psychology. Secondarily, he is seeking smart, funny fiction targeted at a younger male demographic. Prior to Riverhead, David worked at W. W. Norton & Company and Arcade Publishing. CARRIE OBRY is the Acquisitions Editor for Llewellyn Worldwide. Llewellyn is over a century old and is the leading New Age Publisher. Carrie acquires self-help and alternative health projects. LIZ SCHEIER spent four years at the Bantam Dell Publishing Group, and left in early 2004 to join the New American Library, a division of the Penguin Group USA. She acquires mainly science fiction, fantasy, and horror for the Roc imprint, but is also interested in biography, humor, popular culture, and works of GLBT interest. She is a graduate of Bryn Mawr College, where she studied Liz Scheier English literature and thereby rendered herself blissfully unemployable in any other field. PAUL TAUNTON has been on the editorial staff at the Random House Publishing Group since 2003, working mainly on the Ballantine list. Prior to that he worked in Random House sales for several years serving independent booksellers. Categories of particular interest include narrative nonfiction, suspense, crime, literary fiction, and journalism. April 2006 P.O. Box 2016 Edmonds, WA 98020-9516 www.pnwa.org (425) 673-2665 staff@pnwa.org 2006 Summer Conference Agent/Editor Request Form Your Name:_____________________________________________________________ Address:________________________________________________________________ City:_______________________________ State:________________ Zip:_________________ Phone Number:__________________ Email Address: ________________________________________________ Manuscript category or genre: ___________________________________________________________________ Please list your choices in order of preference. Each attendee will be assigned one agent appointment and one editor appointment. If your choices are not available we will assign an agent and editor based on the manuscript category or genre listed above. Notification of appointments will be mailed (in the attendee provided self-addressed business size envelope) approximately two weeks prior to the conference. Appointment confirmation and schedules cannot be given prior to the attendee’s receipt of the appointment cards. Changes to assigned appointments cannot be made prior to the conference. Please visit the agent and editor desk at the conference to make changes. AGENT: Agent appointments are one-to-one and last 10 minutes. The first 150 people to register for the conference will receive TWO agent appointments. 1st Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 2nd Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 3rd Choice____________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 4th Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 5th Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 6th Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ EDITOR: Editor appointments will be held in groups of no more than six conference attendees and one Editor. The appointment lasts for 30 minutes. 1st Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 2nd Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 3rd Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ 4th Choice___________________________________ Office Use________________________________________ (All appointments are assigned on a first-come, first-serve basis) For Office Use: Registrant Number______________ MEMBER NEWS Jennifer Sokol Her book, Six Years Of Grace: Caregiving Episodes With My Mother, was accepted for publication with Tate Publishiwng. At the 2005 summer’s PNWA conference her book was a finalist in the “Memoir” category. Suzanne Selfors At the 2005 summer conference she pitched a novel to Jane Dystel and in October, 2005 signed a contract for representation with her agent Kate McKean. In January, 2006, Suzanne signed a book deal with Little & Brown for two middle grade hardcover novels. Kate van Gelder She recently completed a project for Sasquatch Books to update a portion of the 16th edition of Best Places Northwest, which will be published in 2007. Bob Dugoni, Esq. Two-time winner of the PNWA Literary Award for fiction, Bob is celebrating the release of his debut novel, The Jury Master. His novel, published by TimeWarner Books, will be in stores March 21, 2006. Visit www.BobDugoni.com. Terry Persun Terry’s newest book, Giver of Gifts, has crafted a thoughtful tale of a man searching for the fundamental purpose of life. Visit www.TerryPersun.com. If any of you have publishing news to share please contact us at pnwa@pnwa.org. Page 5 April 2006 UPCOMING EVENTS MESSAGE FROM THE PRESIDENT Member Meeting April 20, 2006 8:00 – 9:00pm How to Get the Most Out of Your Critique Group. Chinook Middle School 2001 98th Ave. NE Bellevue, WA Dear Authors, Each month that passes brings more changes and added benefits to being part of PNWA. In the next few months we will be mailing our newsletters to members and friends of PNWA. We don’t want anyone to miss out on learning all that we have to offer. Some of our exciting opportunities can be found in this issue of Northwest Ink. This year we have invited additional agents and editors to our conference. Our goal is to give you more chances to make your dream of becoming a published author come true. In years past you have had the opportunity to sign up for one agent appointment and one editor appointment. This year we are giving you a bonus opportunity. For those who sign up early, you will be guaranteed two agent appointments in addition to the one editor appointment. Your chances of getting published have just increased. Don’t miss this Early Bird Bonus Opportunity. Board Meeting April 20, 2006 7:00 – 7:45pm PNWA Board meeting (members welcome) The Word Is Out May 6 at 3:00 pm Borders Books in Tacoma 2508 So. 38th Street All genres welcome. 2000 word limit. Send submission to twio@pnwa.org. Submission Deadline March 23rd. Summer Conference Thursday – Sunday, July 13 – 16, 2006 Mark your calendars now! For details: www.pnwa.org/conference MEMBER BENEFITS Special Offer! Get 10% off tickets at the 5th Avenue Theatre. For information contact pnwa@pnwa.org. May 2-21 - Pippin (from the creator of Wicked) www.5thavenuetheatre. org/group1.php3. Follow the prompts to see dates and order tickets. Offer is valid for the top 3 ticket prices for all Tu/W/ Th/Su evening performances. Join us for Spotlight Night, our FREE event featuring Pippin creator Stephen Schwartz. Sunday April 9, 7:00 pm http://www.5thavenuetheatre. org/spotlight.shtml. Page 6 Pam Binder, PNWA President Register for the Summer Conference and Hotel on Line. For the first time we are making this opportunity available. We have been working hard to bring this feature to you. Check out our website for updates to the conference. Speaker Meetings. Our Speaker Meetings have been an amazing success. Each month we offer a speaker who will help inform and teach authors about the writing life. This is our way of building a PNWA writing community, not just in the summer, but all year round. We are always looking for new and innovative ways to improve PNWA and make it more accessible to writers. We welcome all suggestions. Have a great day writing, Pam Binder PNWA President WRITER’S EXPERIENCE It’s A Journey! by Gail Jeidy “Less is really more.” My vacation away came to an abrupt end when I spent the Labor Day weekend laboring at home—clearing every room of clutter, not stopping at the usual clothes and toys and personal detritus, but sparing nothing, not even books. This was no small task for me as I am the kind of person who has a habit of picking up beloved objects and asking my 8-year-old, “Should we give this away or do you want to save it for your children?” This particular household editing session, though, was successful. Not only did I have something real to show for my toils at the end of three days – eight stuffed garbage bags – but I was left with greater clarity. Months later, I am still basking in the calm of my space. I feel better. Think better. I don’t miss what I don’t have. I’ve created some white space in our home, which has made room for something new. I’ve made things better by taking something away, and that’s an empowering feeling. It works the same with writing. The most profound awakening I’ve had with my own work over the past two years has been the power of cutting. I’m not talking about the usual rewriting and editing we all do. I’m talking about cleaning house. Taking a lagging paragraph, a problem scene, or a dull middle, and lopping out whole sentences, butting up new thoughts next to one another and watching how it transforms the work. The best time to do this is after a vacation away from your writing, when you can see with fresh eyes, own what you’ve written, honor the depth acquired in the process of collecting all you did, then cut. Slice away excess words until the consciousness of the characters bleeds through. Cut until your language becomes poetry. I read a lovely little book this week called Love that Dog by Sharon Creech. It’s a children’s novel, a 15-minute adult read, told in a young boy’s voice, and a fine reminder of how very much can be said in so little. Now, when there’s a problem in some part of my story, I resist the temptation to automatically write more. Instead I consider cutting and altering what I already own. It’s painless because I can always stash my garbage bags full of words in an ‘outtake’ file. Moving forward isn’t always measured in pages written. The most powerful progress often comes from pages lost. April 2006 PNWA 2006 SUMMER CONFERENCE REGISTRATION FORM Donʼt miss this exciting 51st Summer Conference, July 13 - 16, 2006. Register Today. You can also register on our website at www.pnwa.org. If you choose to register online you do not need to mail in a physical copy of the registration form. CONTACT INFORMATION Name_______________________________________________Primary Writing Category or Genre________________________________ (This is how it will appear on your name badge) Address ____________________________________________ City _______________________________ State________ Zip_________ Phone ______________________________________________________ Email _________________________________________ P.O. Box 2016 Edmonds, WA 98020-9516 www.pnwa.org (425) 673-2665 staff@pnwa.org CONFERENCE RATES: Youʼll save $100 by becoming a PNWA member. With membership costing only $65, it makes sense to join. Registration fee includes all meals and activities except where noted below, and membership gives you year-round benefits. � $350 Member � $450 Non-member $________________ Registration fee (postmarked by June 6th) Registration fee (postmarked after June 6th) � $400 Member � $500 Non-member $________________ Regular membership to PNWA (new or renewing) � new � renew � $65 $________________ Student membership (new or renewing) Must provide official documentation of current full time enrollment. � $25 $________________ SPECIAL EVENTS: Note that each registrant receives a free ticket to each of the two keynote dinners and one ticket to the Awards Ceremony . Extra tickets for friends and relatives are on a first-come, first-serve basis. We suggest you make your request early. Gayle Lynds, Thursday keynote speaker: I request [ ] extra tickets @ $60 each $________________ Literary Contest Awards Ceremony Friday dinner: I request [ ] extra tickets @ $60 each $________________ Total for Special Events David Morrell, Saturday keynote speaker: I request [ ] extra tickets @ $60 each $________________ $________________ FOOD: Continental breakfasts, daily refreshments, Awards Ceremony dinner, and keynote dinners are included in the registration fee. At the lunch break, sandwiches, etc., will be available at a reasonable cost at booths in the Conference Center. � I need vegetarian meals for Keynote and Awards dinners. SPECIAL SUNDAY SESSIONS: You do not need to attend the conference to register for Sunday Sessions. They run from 9:00 am to noon and require an extra fee. Please indicate your preferred session. All sessions are in-depth, interactive sessions. (Please choose only one of the following five sessions!) � Creating Your World and the World of Magic with Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon � No More Rejections with Alice Orr � How to Write an Irresistible Non-Fiction Book Proposal with Rita Rosenkrantz � Pathways to the Novel with Robert J. Ray and Jack Remick � Surveillance and Counter-Surveillance with Agent Sheila Stevens Special Sunday Session fee � $95 Member � $115 Non-member $_______________ REFUND PROCEDURE: A $50 administrative fee will be withheld for cancellations before June 16. No refunds will be issued for cancellations after June 16. Membership payments are not refundable. Total Amount Due:$________________ PAYMENT: � Enclosed check or money order � MasterCard � Visa Complete name (as it appears on card)________________________________Card number __________________________________ Exp. Date __________ Amount Authorized $____________ Authorized Signature______________________________________Security Code (from back of card -3 digits ) __________ WHAT TO DO NEXT: Please send the following items addressed to PNWA CONFERENCE, P.O. Box 2016, Edmonds, WA 98020-9516: a) Registration Form and Agent and Editor Appointment Form b) Check, money order or credit card details for full amount due, including the membership fee if you want to join PNWA. c) Business-sized envelope that youʼve stamped and self-addressed - weʼll send back agent and editor appointment confirmations and conference confirmation (including confirmation of extra dinner tickets). Please note that by sending in your registration for the conference, you give PNWA permission to use your photo in promotional materials. Because of the panelists’ schedules, last-minute substitutions are a possibility. We reserve the right to substitute new panelists and to change the roster of events. Page 7 Hilton Seattle Airport & Conference Center 17620 Pacific Hwy South, Seattle, WA Coming Soon! 2006 Pacific Northwest Writers Conference July 13-16 2006 Complementary Copy P.O. Box 2016 Edmonds, WA 98020-9516 Phone: 425-673-2665 (BOOK) Email: pnwa@pnwa.org Pacific Northwest Writers Association MEMBER NEWS GENRE CLOSE-UP Playwriting vs. Fiction Writing by Nu Quang Have you ever written a play that has received a staged reading, or even better, that has been produced? If you have, congratulations. You have overcome one hurdle that some fiction writers are struggling with—dialogue. Dialogue dominates a playscript where stage direction, equal to the combination of brief description and narration in fiction, is scattered. In Shakespeare’s plays, stage direction is minimal, mainly about a character’s entrance and exit; for example, “Enter a messenger,” and about a physical activity, such as “They draw.” The memorable one is in Act III, Scene iii of The Winter’s Tale, “Exit pursued by a bear.” Dialogue distinguishes plays from fiction. It also makes plays difficult to write because playwrights don’t have the other literary devices fiction writers have: description and narration. However, produced playwrights know how to make a play work largely through dialogue. How can fiction writers write effective and snappy dialogue that moves the story forward in a dramatic way? The answer is to read plays. Preferably plays that answer the dramatic question: what do the major characters want? A play about characters driven by their desires abounds in conflict, drama, and tension, and is certainly prevalent in characters’ interaction with each other. Shakespeare tops the list. If you have your own favorite playwrights, by all means read their plays. If not, and you prefer contemporary playwrights, Edward Albee, Arthur Miller, Tennessee Williams, and David Mamet follow the Bard. If you are averse to the obscenity in Mamet’s dialogue, expel the “f ” word. But don’t banish it altogether. Instead, take a look at the way Mamet creates conflict and tension in characters’ speeches, and when your own character’s anger justifies it, use that word with the power it carries. Daniel James Brown’s book, Under a Flaming Sky, will be published May 1 and has already been selected as a Barnes & Noble “Discover Great New Writers” title for Summer 2006. It also just received a favorable review in the most recent issue of Publishers Weekly. Learn more about the book at www.danieljamesbrown.com. The Pen and The Key has been chosen as a finalist in the 2005 ForeWord Magazine Book of the Year Awards. There were 1,540 entries, and only 604 finalists were selected to compete in 55 categories. Winners will be announced at BEA in Washington DC on Friday, May 19th at 3pm. We are keeping our fingers crossed.