Antiphon issue 18
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Antiphon issue 18
ISSN 2058-7627 Antiphon Issue 18 Antiphon on-line poetry magazine July 2016 www.antiphon.org.uk Hear readings of these poems http://antiphon.org.uk/wordpress Antiphon – Issue 18 Edited in the UK by Rosemary Badcoe and Noel Williams 2016 editors@antiphon.org.uk www.antiphon.org.uk http://antiphon.org.uk/wordpress @antiphonpoetry Copyright Rosemary Badcoe and Noel Williams 2016 and individual authors. All rights reserved. This electronic magazine may only be circulated in its entirety. Images: Public domain https://www.rijksmuseum.nl Cover - Two ducks at full moon, Ohara Koson, Matsuki Heikichi, 1900 – 1930 Act One - Kingfisher with Lotus Flower, Ohara Koson, Nishinomiya Yosaku, 1900 – 1945 Act Two - Crow with kaki, Ohara Koson, Akiyama Buemon, 1900 – 1910 Interval - Fishing boats, Ohara Koson, 1900 – 1945 Act Three - Sparrows and snowy plum tree, Ohara Koson, Nishinomiya Yosaku, 1900 – 1936 Act Four - White-fronted Goose in the snow, Ohara Koson, Matsuki Heikichi, 1900 Applause - Three turtles between plants, Yashima Gakutei, Kinkokuen Mahiro, c. 1815 –1820 Antiphon – Issue 18 Contents Prologue ....................................................................................................................................... 3 Act One......................................................................................................................................... 4 Ode to my Weight Loss - Krista Cox ______________________________________ 5 Vigilant Poem - Samantha Madway ______________________________________ 6 Atheism - Claire Scott __________________________________________________ 7 The Passenger - Theophilus Kwek _______________________________________ 8 Mass Spectrometry - Hannah Hackney ___________________________________ 9 Maybe It Was Something about Trolls - C Wade Bentley ___________________ 10 Nervous for Cigarettes - Ricky Garni ____________________________________ 11 My Xylophone - Clark Holtzman _______________________________________ 12 Act Two ...................................................................................................................................... 13 Net Operating Loss - Kathryn Pallant____________________________________ 15 Current Account - Annette Volfing ______________________________________ 16 The Decision - Helen Evans ____________________________________________ 17 The Ball - Charlotte Gann ______________________________________________ 18 Suicides - Bayleigh Fraser _____________________________________________ 19 Tumbleweed - Charlotte Innes __________________________________________ 20 Suburban Mid-Life Crisis - Tiffany Krupa ________________________________ 21 Lullaby - David Briggs ________________________________________________ 22 Interval – Reviews .................................................................................................................... 23 Helena Nelson, How (Not) To Get Your Poetry Published __________________ 23 Ruby Robinson, Every Little Sound _____________________________________ 26 Stephen Payne, Pattern beyond Chance __________________________________ 29 Act Three .................................................................................................................................... 31 Changes - Daniel Bennett ______________________________________________ 33 Coltsfoot - Hilde Weisert ______________________________________________ 34 Puffins - David Seddon ________________________________________________ 35 Antiphon – Issue 18 Sinkhole - Simon Haworth _____________________________________________ 36 Passed - John Greening ________________________________________________ 37 Looking for a Northern Light - Rebecca Gethin ___________________________ 38 Laika - Cheryl Pearson ________________________________________________ 39 Act Four ...................................................................................................................................... 40 Erasure - Robert Ford _________________________________________________ 41 Timescape - Jane Røken _______________________________________________ 42 Snapshot, Yesterday - Jennifer A McGowan ______________________________ 43 For a moment, lying on the grass in summer - Ingrid Hanson _______________ 44 At the Van Nuys State Disability Insurance Office - Yxta Maya Murray ______ 46 Vanishing Point - Nicky Thompson _____________________________________ 47 Rue de l’Aude - Sally Spedding _________________________________________ 48 Gloria - Ian Tromp ____________________________________________________ 49 Slim Volume - Seth Crook _____________________________________________ 50 Issue 18 Contributors ............................................................................................................... 51 Antiphon – Issue 18 Prologue Isn’t data great? I’ve been doing a bit of number-crunching, and I’m pleased to find that over the 18 issues of Antiphon we’ve published over 370 different poets. That’s out of over 4500 submissions. During that time Noel and I have added nearly 4000 notes to those submissions as we discuss their various attributes, and that doesn’t include our real-life discussions. You may be interested to know that Noel’s voted ‘yes’ to 11% of submissions, but that I only managed 8% - not that every poem with an initial ‘yes’ actually makes it into the magazine. You may think that the odds are against you, but I’m glad to note that although each issue includes a number of poets we’ve published before, we also include many we haven’t read previously. It’s not a deliberate policy, it just works out that way. Send us really good poems, and we put them in the magazine. As well as our usual quota of interesting and intriguing poems, I was particularly happy to see that Noel has included a review of Helena Nelson’s How (Not) To Get Your Poetry Published. Helena has for many years run HappenStance, one of the UK’s most successful and highly regarded small poetry presses, and she gives very generously of her time reviewing poetry submissions and contributing to the whole merry-go-round. I suggest anyone interested in being published takes a look and considers buying the book. We also have a review of Ruby Robinson’s first collection, ‘Every Little Sound’, which has just been shortlisted for the best first collection category in the Forward Prizes, one of the UK’s most prestigious prizes. Ruby is a local (Sheffield, UK) poet and we’re very pleased and proud that this very moving collection is achieving such recognition. Rosemary Badcoe Page | 3 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Act One Page | 4 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Ode to my Weight Loss I hesitate to tell you that these days, my hand is not a butterfly flit across a wide meadow hip but hard flesh gripping harder flesh This brings to mind dark and sweating haunches at full gallop—you would not know, with your lashes toward me, how little I disturb the long and wheaty grasses but not for lack of trying. Why else would I leave sugar in the bowl, shave inches from myself? I am less now, and watch my thinning with shame and ecstasy, anticipation of ecstasy. Empowerment is in the becoming whispers the weighted side of the scale. What am I becoming? Does my desire whittle me into curly willow or do I indent myself tab after tab to make room in the margins where you can scribble? Oh, unnamed you or named and prodigal you, do you want me to hold these shavings in my hands, wait for you to blow them into a south-leading wind? You see how I try to mark a line between us like your hand is not my hand and only one of us guides the knife, collects what’s falling. I am shrinking, and for all my talk, I hope to draw eyes like a naked mudflap princess or to make myself a harder target. Krista Cox Page | 5 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Vigilant Poem It’s this always-on-watch that keeps me from knowing how to come home, though I can navigate my way. I look lower than I’ve ever looked before – I think I can see the fish-belly undersides of my feet from here. I cower beneath my cover story; I couch my words so often, in so many ways, they are indolent as from throwing their backs, but can something spineless hurt so? I’ve got vocal cords that can’t seem to find their way to an outside voice. (Sometimes the inside one isn’t so quick to show itself either.) And I don’t know why I don’t go, except that I do. Know, that is. But no also. Some days, the ocean opens up onto the lost city of How-Things-Used-To-Be. Yet it takes nearly nothing – sometimes simply nothing – to spur the sea to seal the city back up and leave no seam to say it was ever there at all. Samantha Madway Page | 6 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Atheism I have lost faith in atheism, that desiccated world with gone gods, missing gods, no gods, not really Not even an emaciated one stranded on a cliff in Croatia stunted and silenced by howling winds of logic Not even a god born when a star rises in the east wise men riding refractory camels shepherds waiting in the wings I have lost faith in atheism, leaving me stranded desert worn, desert wasted No Bach with stained glass windows wafts of incense stirring my soul. Twenty one grams of stardust slowly wither in my breast No bowing five times a day to Mecca or touching a mezuzah as I leave each morning I have lost faith in atheism, but my soul is stained with skepticism, shaken with disbelief I will fly to Croatia to find the last shriveled god in the corner of a dim cave We will sing and pray and weep the world back into being Then the gods, the gods will return wending their way through rents in time Gods of wisdom, of water, of wine. Claire Scott Page | 7 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 The Passenger ‘In the months after the tsunami, taxi drivers in the coastal town of Ishinomaki reported picking up ghost passengers who asked to be brought to their destination and then disappeared, leaving their fare unpaid.’ – Inquisitor, 4 February 2016 This, then, is the afterlife. A bend, a shout, a breath of diesel, sunlight’s murmur bleaching the kerb a shade of persimmons. A solitary confinement. No-one else in line, birds passing like vehicles And this way from Sendai, Charon’s vessel an old Corolla pulling up close. In our stories, the dead follow the whirlwind of a river’s course underground, until it comes up for air. The earth is a bell that rings only in the water’s fingers or when struck with an unnatural force, as when Izanami drew a fire from his whalebone comb, and saw in the loam his beloved, Izanagi, asleep at the foot of the well. How the god wept, afraid! Then turned, and, bashful of his fear, sealed death’s throat with a stone. So here we are without refuge. Out from the silent town to the highway’s shoulder, fog-lights, the sounds of brakes, front tyres catching earth, chassis, an open window. Lock, both doors. Release. Theophilus Kwek Page | 8 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Mass Spectrometry The path varies, but the principle's the same: the vacuum draws the sample, light as air, through the ionising chamber. An electron collision leaves it radical, charged, and ringing from the force it shakes itself to pieces. The readout plots the abundance of a given size of fragment. It tends to break the same – again and again, run through alone, a heart in an alembic, struck and set to come apart. This peak – the biggest one – is from the molecule's ion: unbroken, but abstracted, left not quite the same. It gives the mass when it was simple, full, but it's by the fragment peaks that you infer the structure – the way that it was vulnerable, like a fault that casts the way you'd facet a soft, peculiar jewel. You can train your eye. Tune your mind to myriads sent through the beam, tried and cast by fire as many times as needed, until intimate with breaking you come to grasp the wholeness. Hannah Hackney Page | 9 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Maybe It Was Something about Trolls Having spilled coffee on the first few lines of a nascent poem, I am attempting to re-create what I can. There was an excellent first line, as I recall, full of surprise, making promises I would try to make good on. The sort of line you write on the back of a pharmacy receipt and carry around for a week, letting it work, letting yeast bubbles form around the edges, the words just beginning to sugar and fust. I can make out three words – two-and-a-half – like hillocks of high ground in a dark-roast monsoon. There’s “petrichor,” a word I have vowed never to use in a poem, so I can only assume I meant it ironically. I mean, think about the sort of person who would use that word in conversation. And I thought I was done with the word “Ginny,” but there it is again, the nickname I used for my ex-wife, Virginia, because the full name carries with it no warmth at all, especially when you know she was named for Virginia Woolf, and when, toward the end of our time together, I really could picture her walking into a river with her pockets full of rocks. What had I meant to say, though, what illuminating thread had I found between the two words? Beyond that, only the partial word, “rivu –,” which must have gone on to be “rivulets,” and which I hope had nothing to do with tears, though perhaps with the steady work of rain on sandstone, how it carves around harder rock, leaving, after millennia, a stand of resilient hoodoos, like surprised trolls who once, only once, saw the sunlight. I can work with that. C Wade Bentley Page | 10 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 Nervous for Cigarettes If we hold hands we still have free hands with which to smoke which is soothing but unhealthy or eat avocados which are delicious and healthy and filling which now we prefer because we want to live longer than we would were we to keep smoking with our free hands we don’t have to do either we could do nothing with those two hands although we could instead hold those other two hands if we weren’t hungry for avocado or nervous for cigarettes or worried about losing our balance which we might if we do hold so many hands all our hands, because of love. Ricky Garni Page | 11 Act One Antiphon – Issue 18 My Xylophone November 22, 2013 You know what makes me think of the xylophone of my youth? Mallets mostly, and melancholy, my mother’s ironing board in a back room, and for sure Art Linkletter’s House Party where that famous xylophonist played, bonk-bonk-bonk, between the dog act and the ventriloquist with talking hand, a babushka. How we laughed at our enemies when we were young! How our dogs loved us, day by doggy day! So now let us celebrate the xylophone… pa-tink-pa-tank-pa-tonk… somewhere, my mother in tears ironing my father’s old shirt, somewhere, a man kissing a hand on the mouth. Somewhere, mallets in a box on a shelf in a closet. Clark Holtzman Page | 12 Antiphon – Issue 18 Act Two Page | 13 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 Net Operating Loss If I have to die, must I come here first? It was a mistake back then, one I’m now repeating, sitting dreaming in a meeting with tax accountants making the most of a net operating loss. The deckchair stripes on my Texan boss strobe with spirits I drank last night. Buckingham Palace is across the way. Tourists glut around the gilt. If I have to die, must I take my lunch break? That strait between necessity and escape, a stale baguette and the National Gallery, straining to step into Caravaggio’s shadows, where the hot blood flows and it’s alright to show you’re choking. If I must die, can I not first go back to the green stone blast of Penmon, fresh from the snow breath of Snowdonia? Or the slick sweat dawns of Tallebudgera, where the sea points glitter fingers at mangroves and the kayakers make salt water chandeliers, arcing oars plunging into the cool beneath to rise again? If I have to die, must I first go to Tesco and sniff green mangoes, wishing they were a pallet bought bare foot from the fruit and petrol shack, eaten sweet-wet-chinned on the peeling steps out back? Must I go? God, no, to the bladder wrack of a packed tube in summer, the thick-fumed plea for delivery from the strike, suicide or misery that sticks us here, carcasses slung in a switched off fridge. Page | 14 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 If I am to die, must I first relive my shiver-dreams as a Wimbledon boarder under three duvets in vain, though I couldn’t complain. With me in the attic were skis my landlady’d used to rescue Polish Jews, and usher them over the Alpine border. In the summer I’d wander three blocks over to watch with the twist neck look of the paid up observer. If I must die, need I stand in line, lose my change, fall pregnant, abort, tell my mother I’ve been caught kissing that boy Hildebrand? If I must die, must I? Are these the highlights I can muster? Losing an earring clinching a cad in a cab, weeping tears of cold on the Charing Cross Road, coaxing wan poem moods in a class of surfer dudes? If I have to die, must I come here first? At least, God, allow me the sweet epidural blank of mercy. Kathryn Pallant Page | 15 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 Current Account ‘I will knit you a wallet of forget-me-not blue, for the money to be comfy’ (Under Milk Wood) Still half-asleep at six, but fingers tap through memorable words and find their way to where it smiles and breathes, my suckling dream – swaddled in sweetness, shame. Through tingled grey, I note each dip and rise, count out the days still left, accrue, adjust, gulp down the coffee, reconcile myself. Annette Volfing Page | 16 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 The Decision I don’t miss the exit, it blocks me: a line of orange-and-white-striped cones where the slip road ought to be. Still, I’m glad to be forced to drive on, nine miles of midnight and spray, my lit house like salt thrown over my left shoulder, three carriageways almost to myself. There’s fuel in the tank and each amber cat’s-eye dilates as my tyres hiss past. Only a fool breaks the two-second rule, but when mist, dark and rain drown the windscreen in murk who can tell what a safe distance is? So I reach the next junction – twenty-eight – Local Services – whose Shell filling station, stark golden-and-bright, appears like a moment of realisation – and swing back on myself, turning right, south through the whole obscure stormscape, past twenty-nine, closed for the night, back to thirty, where I’d joined the motorway, where I now yank the steering wheel to turn via Sowton Industrial Estate for home. The Astra burns to follow M5 North and not return. Helen Evans Page | 17 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 The Ball We are playing ball – as we always have. But now the ball is big and black, a cold shadow-thing that cuts out sunlight. My brother and I have grown bowed from our long-playing. We hang on tight each time we catch the ball, stagger about, our arms stretched wide. Hold it for longer and longer, then let it loose to bound – lugubriously, almost in slow motion, almost comically – across the ground between us. The beach has shrunk, though gained some sparkle. But, no, the ball has grown. When it bounces my way now, it fills the sky. Charlotte Gann Page | 18 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 Suicides On Tuesdays, we meet in the basement beneath 4th floor murmurs. Fluorescent hums. N. thinks God – only her God – whispers a window open, and her son directs air traffic from the parking lot. J. doesn’t believe in lights that flicker out. Or atmosphere. Says she'll never get an hour of sleep in here. She likes to talk about her daughter’s birthday balloons, blown past Andromeda. Nothing burned ever really disappears. So say the ashes of stars still hungering for eyes. Both know nights feel deeper than days. Both know we meet because that blue bruise remains. Still, thunder reverberates in the building, still, L. brings up his dead dog for a fourth time, hands hung beneath the table, shackled to their latency. That dog was like a child to L. If only his hands on the chain. If only the train. It’s ritual. His father was a farmer who never buried his livestock. He's said twice so far: there was just a body or two strewn over the thirsty field, and no one ever came. The rain drowned them just the same. Bayleigh Fraser Page | 19 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 Tumbleweed Child of driving wind and beaten bush, tall and wide as a car, this dried up tightly woven globe, rolling, bouncing down my street, this giant tumbleweed, blocked now by a telegraph pole, rocking and straining, nudged by wind – it must not stop! – till rain unfurls the naked, coiled seeds, rolling, bouncing, even when all the seeds have dropped on streets, thorny, pallid, skeletal: to go on, with seeming gravitas, though dead, a kind of hell. Charlotte Innes Page | 20 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 Suburban Mid-Life Crisis The time, the piping of the icing, the towel's crease through the loop. Damn the ficus for dropping leaves. Flies must be laying eggs in the eaves… The bland caddy stares – Clicking heels up the stairs – I am a set of rickety stairs leading down – There is a sickness in this cellar, a black rot upon the root. It has a bad smell and it clutches like a cicada at the heel of my foot. I swear – Time is more cruel than silence: the arch of my foot teeters on a slippery ridge; tomorrow, I will toothbrush the fridge. Tongues no longer drool when I slip off my shoes Details! Details! When I burn up there won't be any clues. Tiffany Krupa Page | 21 Act Two Antiphon – Issue 18 Lullaby And when, on the third night, we woke again to the irregular fricative refrain of leathery wings careening into walls, lampshades, bedheads, wardrobes (the hapless determination of pipistrelles circling inches above the bed, over our pillowed heads in the pitch black – black dreams who’d taken the form of bats, crawled from nests in our heads to unfurl their suggestions as they fledged into the room seeking the mosquito-thick skies of their nighthunting) we understood the cost of the sleep that eluded us. Leave every door, every window, open. Risk the night’s small teeth at your throat. David Briggs Page | 22 Antiphon – Issue 18 Interval – Reviews Helena Nelson, How (Not) To Get Your Poetry Published, HappenStance, 138pp, £10 Essential. Invaluable. Indispensable. These are the words reviewers are going to use for this book. Expert. Experienced. Insightful. Probably these too. Beyond them, what else is there to say? This is not a book of poems but a book about getting poems published. We don't usually review such works, but I felt this one was so apt for many of the readers of Antiphon, I'd little choice. HappenStance is one of the more successful small presses, focused primarily on pamphlets and, occasionally, quality books. I am a great admirer of HappenStance. Even when the poems are not quite to my taste, you can see why their editor (Helena “Nell” Nelson) rates them. And the physical quality of each book is consistently beautiful. As well as running the press (probably for more years than she'd dare to confess), Nell is a practising and practiced poet herself, so anything she says is likely to be worth listening to, as followers of the HappenStance blog know. This volume seems to be a distillation of much of that hard-won experience. The book is not one of those about writing poetry – except incidentally – but rather the business of getting those writings published. And, in particular the business of getting a full collection published. It has 24 short chapters, with topics as diverse as blogging and Page | 23 Antiphon – Issue 18 putting a collection together, interspersed with 22 writing exercises to stimulate the imagination. I'm not entirely sure about the inclusion of these exercises. Most are unfamiliar to me, and some most definitely took me to places I wouldn't otherwise have found, which is surely the measure of a good writing exercise. And, I suppose, a book which serves two purposes might sell better, as well as providing added value for readers who find the publication advice too depressing (I'll come back to this). But you can also see the exercises as interruptions to the main purpose of the book or as surplus material you don't really want to pay for but find stuck in the book you actually wanted. Arguably, in a book such as this, more useful exercises would focus on the tasks involved in getting poems out into the world, rather than getting more poems written. For myself, I skipped most of the exercises on first read, being so anxious to penetrate the mystery of how to guarantee I'd get my second collection into print (one of Nell's messages is that there is no guarantee, of course, so be prepared for a heavy dose of realism here). It may be, however, that the exercises become a revisited resource for future occasions, long after the key lessons of (non)publication have dribbled into my bloodstream. Overall, I think the book a clever construct. As well as the interludinal exercises, it's broken up with case studies of typical submissions glossed with Nell's responses. These are all handled with gentle tolerance, even though it's clear that the submissions she has received (probably pretty often, it would seem) include the rude, the careless, the lazy, the ignorant and the arrogant. (A word of advice: it's very clear from these cases that the most important criterion in Nell's judgement is that the poet should follow the submission guidelines. Here at Antiphon we'd say exactly the same. The guidelines are there to make the editor's life easier. Failure to follow them necessarily means that the poet does not care about the editor or their press and that's not the best way to get a sympathetic reading). If you've followed Nell's blog, or been on the receiving end of her generous analyses, or perhaps corresponded with her, you'll know she offers lightly seasoned realism scattered with witty understanding, an empathic recognition of the poet's hazards and fears, and a wickedly honed critical intelligence which always feels as if it's barely resting in its sheath. I guess the appropriate metaphorical blade would be a dirk rather than a claymore, and the sheath looking something like cashmere but you rather suspect might be golden retriever. Consequently the books is a witty, easy, read, continually provoking smiles that mitigate the many realisations of problems to solve. In keeping with her realism, she presents the core needs as business-like activity demanding business-like attitude. She (barely) apologises for this approach, and she's careful to separate that necessary, practical discipline from the open, rewarding playfulness of actually creating poems. They're Page | 24 Antiphon – Issue 18 separate activities. One makes artefacts as close to perfect as possible. The other arranges them in the best light on the market stall. Her message, then, is that the poet who succeeds in publication is the poet who creates opportunities for herself. Networking, self-promotion, making connections, blogging, giving feedback in workshops, reviewing, performing – all these activities put the poet in a place to be noticed and taken seriously and, whilst they'll rarely lead to publication, they have manifold impacts which all increase the chances. This means, naturally enough, that to succeed a poet must commit to a fair amount of work which is not actually the writing of poems. Hence the likelihood that most readers, searching for a way to achieve that instant success they believe their work deserves, will read with overtones of disappointment. I, for example, am pretty well read, reasonably networked and so on, but I recognised in her account at least two areas of my ignorance which could potentially make a big difference to my future chances. Poets starting out may find the long list of things she feels desirable represents a very steep challenge. Yet there's not a sentence in this book I'd disagree with. Essentially, it summarises all we have to think about (well, most of it) if we're to operate as “professional” poets (there's no such thing, of course. We're all amateurs). But she knows the force of these demands, so she tempers her realism in several ways. Her lightness of tone, her wit, her anecdotes, the overall sense of a concerned mentor wanting us to succeed: all act in the manner of an experienced tutor (which Nell is) to encourage us to do better. We might even, in reading her, feel a veritable desire to please her, to make the grade in her eyes. (I'm sure she's not aiming for that, but I bet it happens). For every hurdle, she has – if not a springboard for clearing it, then at least a way of clearing the track which will give us a more confident run-up. Above all, we trust what she says. Of course, the book exists to make money for her press so she can continue to publish more poems. But Nell offers us a sense that she actually wants us to succeed, that she needs to get her message out to help and develop us, that she feels there's this glorious thing “the poem” that she wants to serve, and see more of, to support and succour, and to enable us to deliver to her door. (And, of course, if the book helps reduce the number of crass, arrogant and lazy submissions she receives, then so much the better). Is there nothing I dislike about this book, then? I'd like it to be longer. I'd like her to go deeper into some of the more complex considerations when choosing editors, magazines or presses to submit to. I don't believe there are answers here, which would ensure success every time, but I think there are things Page | 25 Antiphon – Issue 18 which many editors consistently look for which could be more fully dealt with. For example, many editors have a sense of the kinds of things which make for better, or more exciting, interesting, poems. I certainly do. What are hers? Do other editors agree with her? What are the weaknesses which most typically lead to reluctant rejection? So some chapters felt a little short to me. I guess in the world of blog-posts and flash in the pan attention spans, a world which makes this review too long for most people to read to the end, that might be a wise decision. But its brevity made me feel on occasion that she'd said to herself “okay – that's enough on that topic” rather than “that's all that could usefully be said about that topic”. I'm always a little suspicious when I see chapters of very similar length that a book is written to a structured plan based on size rather than ensuring that it's the exact length its topics demand. I like the inclusion of workbook pages at the end, which I will probably make use of, but a little more guidance on how they might be used and how they might relate to specific sections of the book would probably be helpful, especially as some chapters offer implicit checklists which could become explicit guidelines for using these pages. There's no index and, whilst it's a short book and many of the topics are explicit in the chapter titles, equally the wit which drives some of those titles obscures the actual subject, making an index a useful alternative way in. But, given the lack of books of this kind, the brilliance and experience of the author, and her dedication to the verbal art, you'll find this book essential. Invaluable. Indispensable. Ruby Robinson, Every Little Sound, Pavilion Press, Liverpool University Press, 50pp, £9.99 There’s an interest in how things work in Every Little Sound, the world, the body, the brain. The meaning of 'Internal Gain', given in the epigraph, is 'an internal volume control which helps us amplify and focus upon quiet sounds in times of threat, danger or intense concentration': My room was vibrating with electricity sockets and light beams and I could hear every little sound my mouth made. Outside my window a butterfly, miniscule on a roof tile Page | 26 Antiphon – Issue 18 rubbed its wings together excruciatingly. ('Internal Gain') And while I’ve been trying to think of ways to describe the distinctive tone of voice that defines Ruby Robinson’s debut collection, I realise that it’s not the tone I’m struggling to pin down, but how it achieves such vulnerability even in poems where the attention to detail, to systems and processes, seems to create a coolness, a hardness of language. What I think I’ve understood is that it’s a combination of that interest in the world – of trying to understand life through its mechanisms – and the speaker’s human experience of that life that creates something simultaneously direct, distant, intimate and tender. In the title poem, you can see how precise the description of the room is (not electricity but the sockets, not light but its beams), the distance invoked by the phrase 'my mouth made'. Yet in the image of the butterfly, the poem rises into something emotionally stunning. The collection reminds me of ideas around attachment, the precariousness of personhood. The way these poems story-tell psychological experience through the physical sometimes suggests ambivalence towards the other: a careful, protective self-reliance, but also a desire to trust, to let go, as though the speaker is both running towards connection, affection, (security?), and keeping it at arm’s length. Perhaps as the speaker tries to make sense of the world, and her place in it, she is repairing the shattered self evident in poems such as 'Unlocatable', where a head is placed on a shelf, and the dissembled vocabulary 'and constellations / of thoughts' work to undo our most basic sense of agency: And what use am I, half-witted, unpicked, flaked out, half a leg, a spewing mouth, brittle hair, scooped-out heart […]' Or in 'Listen': 'Thus, I unscrew my head, / the lid of a pickle jar'. What it is to listen, to tell, what being heard might mean, is fundamental to that sense of agency. Many of the poems explore, undercut, destabilise the speaker/listener relationship, sometimes through a narrative that refuses the speaker an audience, or through the craft of the poem, disrupting syntax, abandoning sentences, leaving the reader’s expectations hanging. The opening poem seems to assert that relationship with authority, certainty. 'Reader, listener', is an open-armed gesture of welcome: 'come in. I’m opening my door to you […] There’s soup. Bread in the oven to warm'. And it’s not one-way. There are chairs for 'interrogating guests'; the speaker seems to know a lot about you, reader: that you 'wish someone would think of you, spontaneously', that 'your own feet / offend you'. But Page | 27 Antiphon – Issue 18 what we might learn about each other is thrown up in the air through the Platonic last line, where 'shadows of stags are cast like stalking giants' onto the dumb walls. Are the walls of the room barriers, do they imitate or corrupt something like truth? Or in the 'dumb' absence of language, are shadow puppets a fair means of communication? Such vital lines give you faith in the speaker’s voice, even as she questions it. That vitality is what sustains the longer poems. 'Apology' is complex, imageful, powerful, creating a quasi-narrative, expositional, rational and furious. It is the voice of a daughter addressing her mother and it feels very raw. And in its tremendous drive, you sense the speaker is purging herself of what needs to be said, what has been held back and can’t be held back any longer: I’m sorry for resembling your relatives and captors and the man who penetrated you, who’s still there, communicating boldly via intersections of others’ thought waves and memories, blatant into the long nights, haunting, for my inferiority in the face of nuclear family culture, feeding on detritus of white goods, leisure sports, laminate floors, a real home and fake recycling, for creeping by night into a tight void, blinds down, brain blown glass-thin, electric impulses and bloated thoughts bolted in. For this life being the only one my quiet mind knows, its many versions and phases, I’m sorry. Not confessional, but there is something honest in the urgency of the rhythms that communicates a depth and frankness of feeling. Rosemary Tonks said telling the truth about feeling takes integrity, that a state of mind resists description, and perhaps resistance is central to what’s going on here. The speaker resists sentimentality (even as she says she is 'sentimentally sorry / despite a genuine fear of sentimentality'), in language that ranges between uncomfortably intimate detail, anecdote, dialogue, and another register, a professional lexicon of psychological and philosophical jargon ('Consensus reality … pseudo-unhappiness … complex trauma'). This forces the gaze of the poem out into another world without losing its interiority – a layering of types of information that Tony Hoagland might describe as poetic vertigo. The complexity of holding different registers and proximities in your mind creates a self less unified 'but more trustworthy than the average confessional poem'. The repetitions of 'I’m sorry', of 'thank you', the circling of what is known and what is not, of dispossession and memory, creates a struggle with and for the reader that makes reductive readings impossible, conclusions irrelevant: Page | 28 Antiphon – Issue 18 We learn to accept the clouds for what they are and wait, patiently. To read 'Apology' in full is to be within the experience of the speaker. In part because of the hardness of language, clinical at times, the poem, and the collection, is irreparably moving. Angelina d'Roza (An abbreviated version of this review first appeared in Orbis #175). Stephen Payne, Pattern beyond Chance, HappenStance, 80pp, £12 Another beautiful hardback from Happenstance, although this departs from the established appearance to have a patterned, rather than a plain, cover, the design reflecting the book's concept. This is quite a subtle realisation of the content, for the whole of the first section of the book (there are four sections) concerns notions of design, the facets of that word's meaning, the relationship between intent and activity. If this sounds a little academic, that's because it is. The academic preoccupations of this poet are the immediate subjects of many of these poems and, where that's not the case, nevertheless frequently they offer flavours, images, metaphors or reflections which tilt the poem in an abstract or ideational direction. But the consequent work is not dry or dull. Pretty much every poem is driven by an idea, but the approach is almost unique – a poetry which is, almost literally, a poetry of ideas. Sometimes this leads to approaches which are almost Metaphysical as well as metaphysical, where the idea demands an elision of metaphors whose slickness might make it a little hard to grasp, as in 'Fractal Library' where cliff-climbing, exploring a library, fractal modelling and the relationship between knowledge and curiosity are fused in one convincing idea. This makes for exciting reading. Rarely in this volume do you know what you're going to get. Only one poem seemed to me somewhat out of place, as being simply a descriptive observation and nothing more. Frequently the poems offer insight (e.g. in 'Insight') or a sly wit readily appreciated, and they are rich with intelligent humanity, an empathy beyond mere intellectual appreciation of people's complexity. Perhaps some of the humour may be missed if a reader lacks the requisite background in psychology, linguistics or philosophy. For example, the line 'Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo' ('Mimesis') may strike the uninitiated as merely Page | 29 Antiphon – Issue 18 weird nonsense. It's actually a classic linguistic example of correct grammar, providing you can figure out which of the 'buffalo's is noun, which verb and which adjective, and, once you get that, you've the understanding what is necessary to get the rest of the poem, I think. But such knowledge is rarely needed, as long as the reader is prepared to deploy their own intelligence to appreciate how Payne is using his. Payne's is not merely a poetry of ideas, however. It's rich in thought-games, but there are other rewards, too. At times masterfully elegant, at times judiciously shifting style according to subject or intent, he's more than capable of turning a delicate line, or finding appealing rhythms and some unexpected rhymes: Beside the boat, your blade cuts through the sky uncovering the stars the clouds imply. ('Canoeist') and the ideational approach often leads to refreshingly unexpected imagery: When oxygen is compromised and idea can expire, like a canary in a mine. ('Infarct') with some brilliant moments, such as the apostrophe in: Some propositions can't be proved: the better truths are intuition's. ('Translating the Proverb') where we simultaneously read the last word as both with and without its apostrophe. Perhaps not for everyone – the incidental lyricism is heavily restrained, for example, and there's sometimes a deliberately prosaic observational style – my own view is that this book is refreshingly different, entirely stimulating, and deserves a wide readership for its deeply perceptive slant on original but core subjects. As long as you approach it with an open sense of what poetry might be, you'll find much to enjoy here, and perhaps some things to step back and admire. NW Page | 30 Antiphon – Issue 18 Act Three Page | 31 Antiphon – Issue 18 Changes A walk along the creek. Turquoise water, the rarity of a sky reflected over it. Earlier, we asked if summer had arrived. Boats head out from the hard. The red sails, with their precise reflections, slide along like axe heads this glimmer so sharp, it hurts the eyes. I cross the road by the quay and these familiar routes are given a stuttering strangeness outside of established routine: as though I had tried to plane rosewood against the grain. Music somewhere. A passing car. Pollard trees bristle like fists. Further along, a cricket match takes place on the green: men, young and old, barely distinguishable in their whites preparing as the batsman strikes and for a second I see the ball seeking me out. Here I am, taking a catch at the boundary uninvolved but suddenly essential everyone cheering. But it's only a trick of the eye, a bird leaping from a branch, a door closing on a nearby house the receptionist waving as I approach Page | 32 Antiphon – Issue 18 at the hotel check-in. I'm like a wrongheaded spy: tentative hopeless, using my real name when it's my life that's assumed. Daniel Bennett Page | 33 Antiphon – Issue 18 Coltsfoot Humble, ordinary as a sock, ragged, toothy, easily mistook for sidewalk dandelion. Every year we seek them out when we’re anxious for Spring, and Spring has not quite come. We walk the road peering down, poking at the icy leaf-litter, looking for coltsfoot, but really wanting the pretty ones coltsfoot says are next: Trout lily, Canada mayflower, Trillium in waves. As if it is what we call it – a barnyard thing, an amputated cast-off talisman, and not a dozen sprouts newborn on the rocky hill, suddenly standing straight out of muck and gravel, spiny legs stiff against March wind. A small herd of them, equine indeed as they now roam, now cluster, then gather more, another here, another there, collecting themselves, raising each shaggy yellow shock to shake off winter’s last and dingy snow, to draw and greet the sun, to say (now that I hear it), Call me what you will, I am here, and whole. Hilde Weisert Page | 34 Antiphon – Issue 18 Puffins The big-top cliffs of North-Utsire, Staffa, Treshnish, Farne and Hoy roll with clowns – barrel-bodied paddles swimming through the air; diving cannonballs of white guy-wire straight in hoops of water; high-wire surfers drum-roll tumblers silver blade-swallowers; roustabouts with candy floss, sad-eyed jugglers of magic tricks burrowing bottom up tongue fat on sprats. What shall become of them? Perhaps they'll oil their backs with sea-bed’s sweat and hide their bills in nylon net. David Seddon Page | 35 Antiphon – Issue 18 Sinkhole It knows what you wish you knew about failure and has only one instinct, which is to reverse, as antonyms like window and spotlight reverberate in the lost signal of its emptiness. Way down there a road-sign and some bollards marinate, test subjects of its one and only swallow that attracted a few devoted followers who gather now on the central reservation to observe it and hypothesise about depth, if what it really wants is largesse. To devour all this concrete, plastic and metal must have entailed invocations for rain to slake its thirst. It enjoys being a problem, a blind spot, algebraic, like the background stolen from a map of constellations. Simon Haworth Page | 36 Antiphon – Issue 18 Passed for SECH You call it the equivalent of the Enclosures that maddened John Clare. I listen as we walk the path across midsummer fields from the White Horse to Brickyard Cottage. I had resolved not to bring up the turbine that’s going to rise above your house – as damaging as elm disease to the landscape, you say, as we pause beneath a mature ash. I think of, but dare not mention, dieback. We look at the one ‘generator on a pipe’ there towards the east, a small thing, like a hovering predator, not like this one raised before the authorities, where you had your three minutes, but time ran out before the poetry could get up steam – how to convey how vulnerable the dream that needs no permission, to those who want to keep on sharing this infected needle? Now the signals have changed. The go-ahead. Your disused line, where enemies of the farmer (bullfinch, fox, mink, badger) have gathered, conferred, but failed as they failed when the railway came, is tapping out invitations to the wind. And soon, they will appear: like statues from Easter Island that marked the destruction of the island, or cowboy dancers at a Northamptonshire village fete, lining up – Chelveston, Lyveden New Bield – slow-taxiing, emitting a poisonous beauty where they have mustered out in the Fen, in March, to advance on us, as if to the music of Bliss from Things to Come. Let’s talk about something else. The sunset. Going, going. How both wells dried, how even poets (more power to ‘Philip Spender’) must be changed. Who notices pylons any more? For all the heated discussions, who’d tilt at a cooling tower? The sun has gone and here comes the breeze. Through the gloaming, the last trees are like an ancient committee that waves the motion through. John Greening Page | 37 Antiphon – Issue 18 Looking for a Northern Light I wondered if I’d know it for certain or if, in England, it would be bloodless, bland, too far away from its own territory. If I saw it would I somehow be changed? The dark was raw as though it were alive and breathing: constellations were rippling like salmon after midges in a still lake on which the earth was being reflected. In the north, belugas of clouds were shining but still. Should I have stayed indoors? All that night my mind was as watchful as a seal at a breathing hole. Rebecca Gethin Page | 38 Antiphon – Issue 18 Laika The stars carved by the ship. The air carved by the dog's swim. Once I saw a friend pull a trout from the water, a thin ribbon of muscle that lashed against and against the inevitable. Until it stilled. Looked death in the eye. That's how I imagine Laika looked at the last. Out of her element, eyes travelling like old light back to the past. Cheryl Pearson Page | 39 Antiphon – Issue 18 Act Four Page | 40 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Erasure In the last memories I have of you, among those final, pale frames, you’re hardly there, almost absent. The door of your sensible car is still closing, with an ugly thudding, way too sharp and loud, splitting the dead of morning in that icy, empty square where we once lived. And someone’s arms – they can only be yours – wrap about my shoulders. But I have to cut and paste you, repeatedly, into the picture, or you’re gone. I know this happens. Our machinery hums into life, breathes in, breathes out, and anything too sharp begins to fade. It’s just a process; a numbing, an amendment to the archive. I underwent it too – mutated from someone who’d once have broken bones just to touch you, into another man, wandering those three lost days through your new house, and the life you’d filled it with, looking for traces of the things I’d loved about you. Robert Ford Page | 41 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Timescape An old woman is standing on the beach. Quiet: she listens for the shells of twilight. Here are scraps and traces of stories, live connexions where feathers and bones are interwoven. She bends down and picks up a small piece of ruby-glass; it has journeyed all the way from foreign shores. Deep below the high seas, playful cuttlefish are swimming in and out of the skeletons of luckless whalers. The focus becomes scrimmed and touched with copper. By break of day she will hatch from a seagull's egg. This is how it all begins: The bird, its bone. The egg, the stone. The alightment. Jane Røken Page | 42 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Snapshot, Yesterday Firenze Divine rays fall on Santa Maria del Carmine. See? From the top right of the picture? It is the Holy Spirit touching again the city of the de Medici. Can you see me? I am there, in the lower right, very small. I am sitting in the piazza, watching wealth go by. I am claiming sanctuary in the church as floods rise. I am chatting with Masaccio, daily. The frescoes are still wet. I smudge my fingerprint under Eve’s foot, here. You will see it, and know. Jennifer A McGowan Page | 43 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 For a moment, lying on the grass in summer I thought I saw your sense of humour in serried squares sagging in the sky like the undersides of trampolines, glimpsed your penchant for illusion in patterns hung so resolutely still, safety nets below the blue. I thought you might have strung them there for me. It’s the kind of thing you’d do: surprise my eye with spectacle. I know it isn’t you. I know death leaves no half-open door for cloud-signs and signatures to slip back through. But if there were things that spirit-you could do, jobs and joys portioned out by hand or mind or eye, I know this is the one you’d choose: pulling out wonder from the cupboards of the sky. Ingrid Hanson Page | 44 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 At the Van Nuys State Disability Insurance Office I don’t think that even a Buddhist could make this into a teachable moment. Not even Herman Hesse’s Siddhartha. The linoleum is gray-brown and scuffed. The people sit on chairs. They wait for their numbers to be called. They have the glare of frailty. We are wearing cardigans and holding manila folders in our hands. In Hesse’s novel, Siddhartha learns about time. His friend Gotama sits with him by the the Brahmaputra and tells him: Have you also learned that secret from the river; that there is no such thing as time? That the river is everywhere at the same time… the present only exists for it, not the shadow of the past nor the shadow of the future. This makes Siddhartha feel better. His son hates him and ran away. So Siddhartha would rather think that nothing exists or matters. Siddhartha should come to the State Disability Office, as there is no such thing as the disability office. The disability office is everywhere at the same time and at the disability office the present only exists for it. In other words, the trauma is waiting outside, in the car. Everyone is asking technical questions. The ping of terror when the heart valve started to fail the napalm burning of the mind when told that the cancer invaded these things cannot enter here. We want our money. We’re upset and confused but just talk about dates and forms. There is no pleasure here but in reading this sign: YOU MAY BE FINED AND IMPRISONED FOR THREATENING A PUBLIC EMPLOYEE. Also available for your delectation is a huge brown and green piece of fabric art showing a mountain. It hangs on the wall opposite me. Siddhartha might have contemplated this mountain with Gotama, because mountains seen from far away seem meditative. If Siddhartha and Gotama were here, they would put their arms around each other and curse quietly about bureaucracy and corporate aesthetics. Page | 45 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Bad art makes everything worse. If I had hustled more I would have gotten in front of the guy in the blue shirt, who is now ahead of me. He is reading his phone, and also looking at his paperwork. He has little swirly designs on his shirt that look like Gotama’s river. If I had just run a little bit I would have beat him and been 796 instead of 797. Writing does not make you into Siddhartha. I am paying attention to humanity and being an artist by writing this. Siddhartha paid attention to Gotama and water. At the end of the book he paid so much attention that he became the ultimate artist: He became All-Being, and All-Beings don’t need the disability office. I am paying attention to the fact that we are being advised to refrain from hitting SDI factotums, which means that at some point one of us lost her temper. Maybe the person who freaked realized that there is no such thing as time, and so punched the clerk. The disabled person became All-Being but found that it turned her into Shiva instead of the Buddha. None of us sitting in the disability office today are working on All-Being, though. We are too distracted by our medications to become bodhisattvas. And if we achieved transcendence and put the security guard into a sleeper hold then we would go to prison where we wouldn’t exist or matter. Time would stop running behind bars as it does in Van Nuys. Also, in jail the nurses are bad we hear they’re harried and judgmental so we just can’t imagine dealing with our diabetes there. Yxta Maya Murray Page | 46 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Vanishing Point It’s never ending, squares within squares neatly slot into place. I fall between the gaps, catch my breath on the perpendicular. You force me into the tiny space between one breath and the next, small slivers of daylight shining through this strange geometry. They’re all the same to you, these shapes that keep us contained. Separate. While I’m left alone, wondering how it all fits. If I shift my perspective, angles wedge themselves tightly together, try to inhabit the same space – their corners and lines define us, stop us stepping over the edge – you want me to wait for the moments when the wind sneaks through – instead, I want you to smash this place, leave it splintered on the sand expose us to the elements. Nicky Thompson Page | 47 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Rue de l’Aude April 2nd 2016 The cumulous crowd lumbers in from the north over Renée’s smalls and those hounds still dreaming of the boar they missed, and the vet’s wife tussling with sheets that twist and curl in the hissing wind, and the red-faced lad whose ball rolls from his reach down the street. Woodsmoke ripped from blackened stacks, proud bearers of the satellite dish, reminds me that there’s no Resurrection yet in this corner of the world where winter’s grip soon shifts the pegs, bears the bra and thong along to the square where the café dog pees on a plastic chair and the memorial’s soldier in verdegris bronze who’s stood to attention for far too long, boasts a new, less tragic decoration. Sally Spedding Page | 48 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Gloria Praise the day come quietly now school holidays have emptied the roads. Praise the sun sifted through glass of leaves. Praise the trees shedding their brightness along the path. Praise the dog, who hunts squirrels among the trees. Praise neighbourliness, brief communion among strangers, who give the gift of allowing themselves to be known. Praise the ordinary mornings of this world. Praise not wanting anything to be different. Praise awakening on a quiet Monday and being alive, when some known and loved are not. Ian Tromp Page | 49 Act Four Antiphon – Issue 18 Slim Volume Saying it precisely. Or with as much exactitude as might sensibly be wanted. We need not count the grains of sand. Nor be profound or important. Enough to cycle around such things, showing, by our course: we know they're there. Seth Crook Page | 50 Applause Antiphon – Issue 18 Issue 18 Contributors Daniel Bennett was born in Shropshire and lives and works in London. His poems have appeared in a number of places, most recently in Structo, The Stinging Fly and The Manchester Review. He is also the author of the novel ‘All the Dogs’. C Wade Bentley lives, teaches, and writes in Salt Lake City. His poems have appeared in many journals, including Best New Poets, Rattle, Cimarron Review, and Pembroke Magazine. A full-length collection, ‘What Is Mine’, was published by Aldrich Press in January of 2015. Further information about his publications and awards can be found at www.wadebentley.weebly.com David Briggs has published two full collections with Salt, ‘The Method Men’ (2010) and ‘Rain Rider’ (2013). He received an Eric Gregory Award from the Society of Authors, and a Commendation in the National Poetry Competition. His work also features in’ Identity Parade: New British and Irish Poets’ (Bloodaxe, 2010), and a range of magazines and journals including Poetry Review, Poetry London, Poetry Wales and New Statesman. He has a new chapbook with Maquette Press called ‘Vision Helmet’. Krista Cox is a paralegal and an associate poetry editor at Stirring: A Literary Collection. Her poetry has appeared or is forthcoming in Rogue Agent, Whale Road Review, and Pittsburgh Poetry Review, among other places. Find her work and more about her at www.kristacox.me Seth Crook taught philosophy at various universities before moving to the Hebrides. He does not like cod philosophy in poetry, though he likes cod, poetry and philosophy. His poems have appeared in such places as Gutter, New Writing Scotland, Northwords Now, Poetry Scotland, Southlight, Causeway, Page | 51 Applause Antiphon – Issue 18 The Rialto, Magma, Envoi, The Interpreter's House, The Journal, Prole. And on-line in such fine places as Antiphon. One of his poems was selected as one of the Best Scottish Poems of 2014. Helen Evans’s pamphlet, ‘Only by Flying’, drawing on her experience as a glider pilot, was published by HappenStance Press in 2015 (www.happenstancepress.com) and reviewed in Issue 17 of Antiphon. She has a Master’s degree with Distinction in Creative Writing from the University of St Andrews and has been published in a range of magazines. Her website is www.helenevans.co.uk Robert Ford lives on the east coast of Scotland, and writes poetry, short stories and non-fiction. His poetry has appeared in print and online publications on both sides of the Atlantic, including Clear Poetry, Dream Catcher, Firewords, Ink, Sweat and Tears and Wildflower Muse. More of his work can be found at https://wezzlehead.wordpress.com/ Bayleigh Fraser is an American poet currently residing in Canada, where she hopes to continue her education. She previously studied at Stetson University in Deland, Florida. Her poems have appeared in A Bad Penny Review, The Brooklyn Quarterly, Hart House Review, The Lake, One, Rattle, and other publications. Charlotte Gann is a writer and editor from Sussex. Her pamphlet, ‘The Long Woman’ (Pighog Press), was shortlisted for the 2012 Michael Marks Award and her first full collection, ‘Noir’, is forthcoming from HappenStance in late 2016/ early 2017. Ricky Garni was born and raised in Miami and Maine. He works as a graphic designer by day and writes music by night. ‘COO’, a tiny collection of short prose printed on college lined paper with found materials such as coins, stamps, was recently released by Bitterzoet Press. Rebecca Gethin lives on Dartmoor which often inspires her work. She is a Hawthornden Fellow and her poetry pamphlet, ‘A Rowan Sprig’, is to be published later this summer by Three Drops in a Cauldron. Another one will appear next year. Her second poetry collection (2013) was called ‘A Handful of Water’ (Cinnamon Press) John Greening has published more than a dozen collections (notably ‘To the War Poets’, Carcanet, 2013), and several studies of poetry and poets. His edition of Edmund Blunden’s ‘Undertones of War’ (OUP) appeared in 2015, along with a music anthology, ‘Accompanied Voices’. His latest publications are ‘Nebamun’s Tomb’ (Rack Press) and the collaboration with Penelope Shuttle, ‘Heath’ (Nine Arches). TLS reviewer and Eric Gregory judge, his awards include the Bridport Prize and a Cholmondeley. He is RLF Writing Fellow at Newnham College. More details at www.johngreening.co.uk Hannah Hackney has writing published in such venues as Puritan, Raintown Review, Rotary Dial and Lemon Hound. She is the co-creator of Dyad Press, which publishes small handmade books of art, poetry, and photography. In addition to her work as a journalist and technical writer, Hannah currently works in polymer research in Montreal, Canada. Page | 52 Applause Antiphon – Issue 18 Ingrid Hanson is an academic, writer and performer living in Sheffield with her two teenagers. Her published work includes a monograph on William Morris and articles on Victorian literature and peace protest, nineteenth-century socialism, the politics of breastfeeding, and international debt. Simon Haworth works as a lecturer in literature and creative writing and as a music tutor. His poems have appeared in various magazines and journals. Clark Holtzman lives in Chapel Hill, North Carolina. The included poem is part of a book-length manuscript with the working title, ‘Selfiedom’. Charlotte Innes is the author of ‘Descanso Drive’, a first book of poems, to be published by Kelsay Books in 2017. She has also published two chapbooks, ‘Licking the Serpent’ (2011) and ‘Reading Ruskin in Los Angeles’ (2009), both with Finishing Line Press. Her poems have appeared in many publications, including The Hudson Review, The Sewanee Review and Rattle, and anthologized in ‘Wide Awake: Poets of Los Angeles and Beyond’ (Beyond Baroque Books, 2015) and ‘The Best of the Raintown Review’ (Barefoot Muse Press, 2015), amongst others. She teaches English and creative writing at the Lycée International de Los Angeles. Tiffany Krupa is a writer, photographer, actor, activist, and avid stand up paddler based in Central Coast, California. Her work has appeared, or is forthcoming, in Askew Poetry Journal, Arsenic Lobster 2010 Anthology, The Albion Review, Lit Mag, and The Slate. She is the 2016 1st place winner of the Peter Murphy Winter Poetry & Prose Getaway, Stockton College's Toni Brown Memorial Poetry Prize, Stockton College, and the 1st prize winner of the 2007 John Curtis Underwood Memorial Poetry Prize. Theophilus Kwek is the author of two collections, ‘They Speak Only Our Mother Tongue’ (2011) and ‘Circle Line’ (2013), which was shortlisted for the Singapore Literature Prize in 2014. He won the Martin Starkie Prize in 2014 and the Jane Martin Prize in 2015, and is President of the Oxford University Poetry Society. Jennifer A McGowan won the Geoff Stevens Memorial Prize and her first full collection, ‘The Weight of Coming Home’, is now published. Her poems have been accepted by The Connecticut Review, Agenda, Pank, The Rialto, Acumen, Poetry Salzburg, and other magazines on both sides of the Atlantic. She has two chapbooks with Finishing Line Press. She has been shortlisted for the Bridport and highly commended in the Manchester Cathedral competition for the second year running. Samantha Madway is engaged in the lengthy process of transcribing hundreds of pages of her writing from barely legible blue ink into reader-friendly (twenty-first-century) Times New Roman type. She loves her dogs, Freddie and Charlie, more than anything else in the universe. Yxta Maya Murray is a writer and a law professor who lives in Los Angeles. She has published six novels, including 2002's ‘The Conquest’. Kathryn Pallant is a PhD student in creative writing at the University of Manchester. Her poetry is forthcoming in Cake. Her first novel, ‘For Sea or Air’, was long listed in the Mslexia Novel Competition and she was winner of the Weaver Words Flash Fiction prize. Page | 53 Applause Antiphon – Issue 18 Cheryl Pearson lives and writes in Manchester, in the North West of England. Her poems have appeared in publications including Compass Magazine, The Journal, and Skylark Review (Little Lantern Press). She has had a poem featured in The Guardian's ‘Poetry Workshop’ feature, and was shortlisted for the York Literature Festival Poetry Prize, and the Princemere Poetry Prize 2015. Her poem, "Mam Tor", was placed third in Bare Fiction Magazine's 2016 poetry competition. She has work in the forthcoming issues of Envoi, Interpreter's House, and Neon Magazine. She is currently working on her first full length poetry collection. Jane Røken lives in Denmark, on the interface between hedgerows and barley fields. She is fond of old tractors, garden sheds, scarecrows and other stuff that, in the due course of time, will ripen into something else. Her writings have appeared in many very different places, mostly online. Claire Scott is an award winning poet who has been nominated twice for the Pushcart Prize. She was also a semi-finalist for the Pangaea Prize and the Atlantis Award. Claire was the grand prize winner of The Maine Review’s 2015 White Pine Writing Contest. Her first book of poetry, ‘Waiting to be Called’, was published in 2015. She is the co-author of ‘Unfolding in Light: A Sisters’ Journey in Photography and Poetry’. David Seddon was born in Liverpool and now lives in Congleton, Cheshire where he is a counsellor. He has many poems published in various ezines and magazines including The Interpreter’s House, Obsessed with Pipework, Under the Radar, Ink Sweat and Tears, Poems in the Waiting Room, Northwords Now, Sentinel, Poetry Scotland, Decanto and Poetry Cornwall. He is in several anthologies, including: ‘Sculpted, Poetry of The North West’; the ‘Macmillan Cancer Charity Anthology’ (Soul Feathers); ‘Verse Versus Austerity’ (The Robin Hood Tax Book) and ‘Earth Love’. He was also a co-editor of the Sonnet Anthology, ‘The Phoenix Rising From The Ashes’. He is actively pursuing getting his first collection of poems published. Sally Spedding was born by the sea near Porthcawl and studied Sculpture in Manchester and at St. Martin’s London. Her Dutch/German background and introduction to the surreal, narrative dyptichs and tryptichs of the Flemish School at an impressionable age, fuelled a need to write. She is an awardwinning and well-published poet and crime writer drawing inspiration from both Wales and France – countries with unfinished business. Married to the artist Jeffrey Spedding, they live in Carmarthenshire and the haunting Cathar country of the Eastern Pyrenees. Nicky Thompson has been published in various journals and online. She works as a Community Development Officer helping to make a difference to local communities, and runs creative writing and writing for wellbeing workshops. She lives near the sea in Whitstable and has two dogs and a cat. Her best ever writing experience was a six week residency at a beach hut. Her website is www.pebblepoetry.co.uk Ian Tromp works as a counsellor/psychotherapist in private practice. After a long period of writing poetry criticism for various publications (Poetry Review, TLS, PN Review, etc.), he wrote nothing for years. He is now returning to poetry and has poems recently out in The Reader, Bare Fiction, The Interpreter’s House and Acumen. Page | 54 Applause Antiphon – Issue 18 Annette Volfing is an academic teaching medieval German literature. Her poems have appeared in various magazines, including Other Poetry, The Interpreter's House, Lighthouse, Magma, Smiths Knoll, Snakeskin and Under the Radar. She has a chapbook forthcoming with Black Light Engine Room. Hilde Weisert's poetry collection ‘The Scheme of Things’ was published in 2015 by David Robert Books. Her poems have appeared in such magazines as Ms, Calyx, Prairie Schooner, Cincinnati Review, Paterson Literary Review, Southern Poetry Review, the Cortland Review, and the NY Times. She was awarded fellowships from the Virginia Center for the Creative Arts and the NJ State Council on the Arts and was a longtime Geraldine Dodge Poet when she lived in New Jersey. She lives in Chapel Hill and part-time in western Massachusetts, NC. Page | 55 Issue 18 2016 Antiphon on-line poetry magazine www.antiphon.org.uk http://antiphon.org.uk/wordpress