Gypped: A Study and Implementation of the Screwball Comedy
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Gypped: A Study and Implementation of the Screwball Comedy
Gypped: A Study and Implementation of the Screwball Comedy Jesse Newman Lindorf Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements For the Degree of Master of Fine Arts in Film and Television at The Savannah College of Art and Design © May 2012, Jesse Newman Lindorf The author hereby grants SCAD permission to reproduce and to distribute publicly paper and electronic thesis copies of document in whole or in part in any medium now known or hereafter created. Signature of Author and Date _________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________/____/____ Professor Lubomir Kocka Date Committee Chair ________________________________________________________________________/____/____ Professor Christopher Auer Date Committee Member ________________________________________________________________________/____/____ Professor Burton Sears Date Committee Member Gypped: A Study and Implementation of the Screwball Comedy A Thesis Submitted to the Faculty of the Film and Television Department in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of Master of Fine Arts Savannah College of Art and Design By Jesse Newman Lindorf Savannah, Georgia May 2012 Table of Contents 1. List of Images..…………….……………………………………………………………….. 1 2. Thesis Abstract…………….……………………………………………………………….. 2 3. Introduction………………………………………………………………………………… 3 4. History of the Genre……………………………………………………………………….. 3 5. Elements of Film Language in the Screwball Comedy……………………………………. 5 6. Reverse Class Snobbery in It Happened One Night………………………………………. 6 7. Howard Hawks’ Bringing Up Baby……………...……………….……………………….. 7 8. Billy Wilder’s Some Like It Hot…………………………………………………………… 10 9. Gregory La Cava’s My Man Godfrey………………………………………………….. 12 10. Anti-heroes and Ritualistic Humiliation of the Male in The Lady Eve……………….. 13 11. Implementation of the Screwball Genre in Gypped………………………………………. • Figure 11.1…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 11.2…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 11.3…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 11.4…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 11.5…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 11.6…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 11.7…………………………………………………………………………… 15 16 16 17 18 18 18 18 12. Analysis of Gypped: Strengths and Weaknesses…………………………………………. • Figure 12.1…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 12.2…………………………………………………………………………… • Figure 12.3..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.4..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.5..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.6..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.7..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.8..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.9..………………………………………………………………………….. • Figure 12.10………………………………………………………………………….. 19 19 19 20 20 20 20 21 21 22 22 13. Conclusion…………………………………………….………………………………….. 23 14. Bibliography…………………………………………………..……………….…………. 24 15. Filmography…………………………………………….....……………………………… 25 1 List of Images • Figure 11.1 A police woman gropes Tom. Gypped Still • Figure 11.2 An enamored waitress lays a kiss on Tom. Gypped Still • Figure 11.3 “A pretty little thing like you could get lost in these parts.” Gypped Still • Figure 11.4 A strip club replaces the typical nightclub. Gypped Still • Figure 11.5 A large crowd chases Tom down the street. Gypped Still • Figure 11.6 Excited women make Tom dance for money. Gypped Still • Figure 11.7 Tom hides in a dumpster. Gypped Still • Figure 12.1 A standoff ensues with Tom as the prize. Gypped Still • Figure 12.2 A jealous boyfriend witnesses the kiss. Gypped Still • Figure 12.3 A dizzy waitress experiences vertigo. Gypped Still • Figure 12.4 Tom and homeless lady enter background. Gypped Still • Figure 12.5 Scene lacks energy with static blocking. Gypped Still • Figure 12.6 A mild reaction is uncharacteristic of genre. Gypped Still • Figure 12.7 Papers fall to reveal Tom’s mistake. Gypped Still • Figure 12.8 Tom immediately reacts in embarrassment. Gypped Still • Figure 12.9 Male gas station clerk flirts with Tom. Gypped Still • Figure 12.10 Tom reacts too soon to build comedy. Gypped Still 2 Gypped: A Study and Implementation of the Screwball Comedy Jesse Newman Lindorf May, 2012 This thesis provides an analysis of the conventions and film language of the screwball genre and compares my thesis film with five successful films of the genre. The effective cinematic techniques and comedic tools used in the films are evaluated and applied to the production of Gypped. 3 Introduction As a filmmaker, it is important to understand the relationship between film language and genre in both in conceptualization and production of a film. The conventions of a genre are time-tested and appeal to a wide group of people. The audience has certain expectations when they see a genre film and it is important to leave your audience satisfied by meeting or exceeding their expectations. My goal in directing my thesis film, Gypped, has been to create a successful comedy. To do so, I studied the conventions and techniques of the screwball comedy genre. The screwball genre faded during the Second World War, but despite a near drop off of the genre, screwball comedies have resurfaced throughout the years. Some Like It Hot (1959), W hat’s Up, Doc (1972), Dirty Rotten Scoundrels (1988), Notting Hill (1999), A merican Sweethearts (2001), and Bringing Down the House (2003) can all be considered screwball comedies. Within a historical context, this study provides an in-depth analysis of five films of the screwball comedy, detailing the tropes that brought the genre much success in the 1930s and 1940s and continue to live on in comedies today. This study compares the five successful films to my thesis film, Gypped, which is heavily influenced by the screwball genre. It compares the use of elements in the successful films with the use of the same elements in Gypped. Finally, this study analyzes a strong scene in Gypped, as well as a weak scene, in regards to the successful implementation of comedic techniques and elements. History of the Screwball Genre The Screwball Comedy first became a genre in 1934 with two films made in that year. Frank Capra’s It Happened One Night and Howard Hawks’ 20th Century are considered the two 4 prototypes of the genre.1 Both films contain the elements that make up a screwball comedy, including a dizzy dame, a likeable but befuddled hero, and witty dialog.2 Fast and polished insults in dialog and actual violence are also main tropes in screwball comedies.3 In 1934, America was five years into the Great Depression, which began with the stock market crash in 1929. Despite the countrywide slump of financial hardship, people continued to go to the movies to escape the tough reality they were faced with. However, the consistent attendance in the movie theaters was not enough to keep the studios from the effects of the Depression. If it were not for the success of It Happened One Night, Columbia Pictures likely would have failed.4 Films that portrayed the problems of the depression, yet had the protagonists overcome those problems succeeded in drawing audiences to the theaters. In It Happened One Night, a privileged and wealthy woman must travel across the country with no money. She becomes a better person emotionally and spiritually because of her experience. This resonated with audiences and made them feel better about their own financial situations.5 During World War II, screwball comedies largely disappeared to become little more than an influence on the broader romantic comedy genre. The public seemed to adopt more of a serious attitude during this period in time and they expected the same from the movies they 1 McDonald, Tamar J. Romantic Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre. (Great Britain: Wallflower Press, 2007), 18. 2 Ibid. 3 Ibid., 20. 4 Ibid., 21. 5 McDonald, Romantic Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 22. 5 watched in the theaters. Films that attempted to mix screwball comedy with a war setting failed to draw audiences to the theaters and were not financially successful.6 Elements of Film Language in the Screwball Comedy In screwball comedies, certain thematic characteristics, as well as visual and aural elements, hold true throughout. Characters are eccentric and act unpredictably. The dialog and action is fast-paced with an overlap in delivery and a perfected and witty script, blending sophistication with slapstick. One man or woman chases the other in love, and the films end in a mutual agreement, both neither winning nor losing.7 The screwball comedy embraced elegant settings, beautiful people, and escapist themes so that audiences could forget the trying times of the Depression.8 The genre also usually includes slapstick elements such as chases and pratfalls and features male and female protagonists who often start with a fight and end up in love.9 There is also a “reverse class snobbery” inherent in the films. To be wealthy is to be out of touch and to be street-smart is better than being book-smart.10 Usually, a protagonist’s world is turned upside-down as they go from rich to poor, poor to rich, or other subversion of normality.11 It is usually the male protagonist whose world goes topsy-turvy by the hand of a woman. 6 Ibid., 18. 7 Ibid., 23. 8 Gehring, Wes D. Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy. (Lanham: Scarecrow Press, 2002), 4. 9 McDonald, Romantic 10 Ibid., 23. 11 Ibid., 24. Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 21. 6 Another trope of the subgenre is the battle of the sexes with the male usually losing. An aggressive, often predatory female is the heroine and is often triumphant in the end.12 In addition, role-play is utilized as characters pretend to be someone else and adopt a disguise or accent.13 Reverse Class Snobbery in It Happened One Night The screwball comedy It Happened One Night contains elements of “reverse class snobbery.” Ellie Andrews is a spoiled heiress, about to marry an industrialist of whom her father does not approve. On her father’s yacht, she throws a tantrum, knocks over a food tray, and jumps ship to find her fiancé in a cross-country journey. On the way, she teams up with Peter Warne, a middle class man who teaches her the real value of money and how to get by in the real world. When Ellie runs out of money, Peter steals some carrots for her to eat. He eats a carrot while waiting for a car to show Ellie how to hitchhike. The lack of traffic prompts Ellie to say, “Well you’ve given me a very good example of the hiking. Where does the hitching come in?” Obviously hungry, Ellie asks Peter what he is eating. When she finds out it is a raw carrot she scoffs at it. “Why didn’t you get me something I could eat?” she pouts, reinforcing Peter’s opinion that she is a spoiled brat. “Oh that’s right, the idea of offering a raw carrot to an Andrews,” Peter says sarcastically. The scene plays out in mostly two-shots of Peter and Ellie bickering. This allows the performance of the actors to unfold without being interrupted by cuts. Peter is confident, but fails again and again to flag someone down. He laughs at Ellie for wanting to give it a try, but she is immediately successful when she raises her dress to flash her leg at the next passing car. The following is a reaction shot from Peter who stands up in disbelief. Next, a close up shot of her 12 Ibid., 20. 13 Ibid., 24. 7 leg cuts to a close up of a foot slamming on the brakes followed by a shot of the parking brake lever being pulled and a shot of a tire screeching to a halt. These well-timed, quick secession of shots transitions brilliantly into the next scene with a shot of the front of the car driving down the road with the two hitchhikers in the back seat. Later on, she accepts the carrots, making up for her waste of food in the beginning. Just before she marries her fiancé, she realizes her empty life of riches with him is a mistake. She flees the ceremony and reunites with Peter to be with him instead, rejecting her empty life in high society.14 Howard Hawks’ Bringing Up Baby The protagonists of Bringing Up Baby (1938) are both of the same social class. However, the male and female protagonists are separated by their choice of lifestyles. The film displays a disapproval of David’s stuffy values when events unfold to release him of his former lifestyle.15 It is in this contempt that the theme of reverse snobbery holds true. The male protagonist is a sexually repressed archeologist named David who is engaged to an equally stuffy fiancé. It is up to a carefree and boisterous woman named Susan to turn David’s world upside down, teaching him how to have fun and helping him to realize his sexual desire.16 In the typical screwball genre, it is usually a female protagonist who affects change and makes the protagonist male’s world go topsy-turvy in a subversion of normality. She is his opposite, so while he may be repressed, she is there to break him out of his stuffy, sexless pursuits. Violent acts delivered upon the stuffy male are a necessity to free him. In Bringing Up 14 McDonald, Romantic 15 Ibid., 26. Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 25. 16 McDonald, Romantic Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 26. 8 Baby, Susan foils both David’s career and his wedding in deceitful ways. However, her methods are acceptable since they are for his own good.17 An example of this is a scene where Susan, the dizzy dame, manipulates the likeable yet befuddled hero, David, by leading him to believe a leopard has attacked her. Prior to this, David had explained to his fiancé, Alice, that he does not want another woman meddling in his life. “It’s fatal,” he exclaims. Immediately after he gets off the phone with Alice, he gets a call from Susan who asks for his help in finding a home for a leopard. David refuses to help, but when Susan makes a ruckus by accidentally tripping over the phone cord, he believes a leopard has attacked her. Realizing his concern for her, she screams into the phone to manipulate him into coming to her rescue.18 This scene also serves to visually show the contrast between Susan and Alice. In similarly composed shots, each woman is in turn shown on the phone with David. They sit in the middle of the frame, looking left in the same position, yet they are dressed in contrasting attire. Alice’s wardrobe and hairstyle is conservative and her surroundings are bland. Alice wears a bland suit, buttoned to the neck. Her hair is pinned up and her posture is rigid. There is a similarity between Alice and David, who also dresses conservatively, has an uptight posture, and sits in a bland room. In contrast to Alice, Susan’s wardrobe is elegant and sensual, her hair is let down, and her apartment is visually striking and more open.19 In addition, her room is brightly lit, contrasting Alice’s darker room. 17 Ibid., 27. 18 Ibid., 29. 19 McDonald, Romantic Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 29. 9 The ritualistic humiliation of the male is evident in the scene where Susan delays David’s departure by having him take a shower and then sending his clothes to be cleaned. He has already sustained several other humiliating moments and now must wear a particularly effeminate negligee. Each humiliating incident adds to the humor as David becomes increasingly aggravated in his attempt to create order while Susan makes order impossible.20 In David’s transition from competent to incompetent, David is forced to answer the door to Susan’s aunt wearing only the negligee. In response to her inquiry as to why he is wearing the gown, he flails his arms in the air and shouts, “I went gay suddenly.”21 By the end of the film, Susan has kidnapped David, dressed him in women’s clothing, made him pretend to be someone else, and landed him in jail. Despite all this, she wins him over from the bland fiancé by giving him the most fun night of his life. When he admits his love for her, he is freed from his constraints of his prior, stuffy life. This inversion is typical in screwball comedies as are the elements of role-playing, class snobbery, and a mixture of slapstick elements with elegant sets and costumes.22 In many screwball films, romance is downplayed in favor of comedy. The screwball genre does not emphasize the affection the couple has for one another throughout the film, but rather expresses it through aggression. Whereas romantic comedies have a focus on love, screwball comedies focus on humor. The screwball films, My Man Godfrey (1936) and Some Like it Hot (1959) are good examples of this characteristic of the genre. My Man Godfrey is more concerned with punishing 20 Gehring, 21 Braudy, Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy, 4. Leo. Great Film Directors. P-N. (New York: Oxford University Press, 1978), 459. 22 McDonald, Romantic Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 29. 10 and embarrassing the love interest rather than flattering them. It is not so much “love” that the female protagonist feels for the male protagonist, as it is sexual attraction. This is the case with many screwball comedies. In the 1959 screwball hit, Some Like It Hot, two male musicians hide from the mob dressed as women and each, in turn, attempt to trick a pretty woman into bed with them. Billy Wilder’s Some Like It Hot The American Film Institute voted Some like It Hot the best comedy of all time. The film, directed by Billy Wilder, showcases all of the typical elements of the screwball genre, including role-playing, as the two male leads must dress in drag to escape gangsters. The film also showcases fast, witty dialog, an anti-heroic world, farcical situations, elegant settings, slapstick humor, and a dizzy dame, played by Marilyn Monroe. Tony Curtis and Jack Lemmon play Joe and Jerry, two musicians who witness a mob hit and must flee Chicago, disguised as women with an all-girl jazz band traveling to Florida. The anti-heroic nature of the two main characters changed the way protagonists in comedies were written and performed and became the fundamental base of protagonists in comedies to follow.23 Much of the comedy comes out of the struggle of Joe and Jerry, disguised as Josephine and Daphne, as they attempt to pass themselves off as women. The plot places the characters in farcical situations, but the humor would not work if the other characters were not so oblivious to the guise. This allows for a lingering male quality to Josephine and Daphne that the other women never pick up on.24 23 Gehring, Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy, 114. 24 Scott, Andrew. Comedy: the New Critical Idiom. (New York: Routledge, 2005), 68. 11 The two men first commit to the role-playing charade in the scene where they follow the jazz band onto the train. Dressed convincingly as women, they struggle to walk in high heels and have second thoughts as they walk toward their train at the station. In a close up of Joe, we see that he is making an honest yet unconvincing attempt to conduct himself like a woman. Jerry sees this and mimics Joe. The camera tracks behind the pair in a comedic shot that communicates the men’s poor attempt to walk in heels. “How do they walk in these things?” Jerry asks. “It must be the way the weight is distributed,” Joe replies. “It is so drafty. They must be catching colds all the time,” Jerry complains. It is not until they witness the graceful ease in which Marilyn Monroe’s character, Sugar, conducts herself that the men realize it will take more than a convincing disguise to pass as women. They learn that their femaleness depends on the quality of their performance.25 Mimicking Sugar, the two introduce themselves to Sweet Sue of ‘Sweet Sue’s Society Sycopators’ and are welcomed aboard. They do such a good of a job of acting like ladies that Sweet Sue says to the band’s manager, “You better tell the other girls to watch their language.” Role-playing is used in other places in the film as well. By the time they reach Florida, Joe has fallen in love with Sugar and in an attempt to woo her he adopts another disguise as Shell Jr., owner of the Shell Oil Company. Later, when the gangsters catch up to them, Jerry disguises himself as a bellhop while Joe disguises himself as a man in a wheelchair. Their cover is blown when Jerry forgets to lose the high heels. A chase ensues, full of pratfalls, and the heroes make their escape. 25 Ibid., 67 12 Gregory La Cava’s My Man Godfrey My Man Godfrey is an excellent example of the protagonist’s world turned topsy-turvy by a female’s hand. Godfrey, played by William Powell, goes from being homeless to living in a luxurious mansion as a butler by the hand of the heroine. Reverse class snobbery is present as the rich are shown as empty-headed and selfish eccentrics exploiting the homeless as pawns in a scavenger hunt.26 The rich and spoiled heiress, Irene Bullock, wins the scavenger hunt after bringing in Godfrey, a levelheaded man of the people.27 Carole Lombard as Irene is as dizzy a dame as Katherine Hepburn in Bringing Up Baby and just as madcap. In fact, whole family is made up of screwballs.28 This is evident in the scene where the father, Alexander, delivers the news that the family is out of money. He starts by tossing Carlo, the mother’s “protégé” and family mooch, out of the window. This is heard and not seen, as the action happens after the two men round a corner. This gag is more successful than showing the action because it leaves it up to the audience to imagine the incident. When asked where Carlo went, Alexander states, “He left very hurriedly through the side window.” Up until this point, the head of the household was shown in a weak position, allowing his family to walk all over him. This was in keeping with the lack of male power the genre follows. Alexander sits the family down and explains the family’s financial situation adding, “If I do end up in jail it’ll be the first peace I’ve had in twenty years.” At this, Godfrey steps in to save the day, revealing that he bought most of the family’s stock that was dumped on the market and 26 McDonald, Romantic Comedy: Boy Meets Girl Meets Genre, 32. 27 Ibid., 30. 28 Gehring, Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy, 15. 13 endorsed it over to Alexander’s name. He offers it as a repayment for the help he was given by the family. He shares a lesson he learned in humility and the fallacy of false pride and then parts ways with the family, failing to say goodbye to Irene who finds her family in tears. “What’s the matter with everybody?” she asks. “He’s gone,” her mother tells her. “And Carlo’s gone out of the window. Everybody’s gone!” she cries. Anti‐heroes and Ritualistic Humiliation of the Male in The Lady Eve A perfect example of the anti-heroic world of screwball comedy is Preston Sturges’ 1941 film, The Lady Eve. Made late in the initial screwball movement, the film combines all of the essential tropes of the genre, including fast, witty dialog, escapist themes, elegant settings, class issues, plotlines involving courtship, slapstick humor, and anti-heroes.29 There are four components to the anti-heroic world of the screwball comedy. These include professorial leisure time, childlike nature, male frustration, and a propensity for physical comedy.30 In The Lady Eve, the anti-hero is Charles “Hopsie” Pike, played by Henry Fonda. Similar to the professorial quality of David in Bringing Up Baby, Charles is an ophiologist returning home on a ship after a year in Africa. On the boat ride home, he falls in love with Jean Harrington (Barbara Stanwyck) who learns he is heir to his father’s fortune. Jean is an aggressive and predatory woman bent on cheating the innocent and gullible man-child out of his money.31 The anti-hero in any story starts off capable and transitions to incompetent.32 Once Charles meets Jean, he gradually becomes a stumbling fool, who has lost himself to the seduction of Jean. She has full control over him, keeping him in a weak position. He is often 29 Gehring, Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy, 19. 30 Ibid., 53. 31 Ibid., 44. 32 Ibid., 4. 14 frustrated with Jean and exclaims, “You have the darnedest way of bumping a fellow down and bouncing him up again.” When he becomes wise to her game, she adopts an English accent and disguises herself as Eve Sidwich to fool him once more. Similar to the 1941 film, Two-Faced W oman, Jean is able to convince Charles that she is two different women.33 Charles first meets Eve at a party at his father’s mansion. This scene delivers plenty of physical comedy. At first, he believes Eve is Jean, but then doubts himself and literally falls for her tricks once more. Distracted by Eve, Charles falls over a sofa that his father points out has been there for years. Charles, unable to keep his eyes off Eve, proceeds to trip and pull down a curtain from a doorway. Later, Eve’s dress gets caught under a chair and he unsnags it for her. “Glad it’s not my fault this time,” he says before knocking over a platter of tea as he stands back up. The heroine is once again the source of the ritualistic humiliation of the male.34 The genre tends to keep males in a weak position, balancing any display of male strength with one of weakness.35 There are four qualifiers for a male to have power. One option is to create additional men who are dominated by females. Jean keeps her father, played by Eugene Pallette, in check when he tries to cheat Charles out of 30,000 dollars. In My Man Godfrey, the female-dominated father, also played by Eugene Pallette, counters displays of power from Godfrey. Godfrey turns out to be wealthy, living on the streets by choice. To counterbalance this, Godfrey is initially shown in a weak position, as a homeless man and later as a servant.36 33 Gehring, Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy, 44. 34 Ibid., 43. 35 Ibid., 52. 36 Ibid., 52‐53. 15 Any victory the male might have is often overshadowed by a victory by the female. Godfrey teaches the whole family a lesson, but Carrol Lombard’s character wins in the end when she makes Godfrey marry her. In cases like His Girl Friday (1940), the roles are reversed and it is up to the male to save the female from a stuffy life.37 Implementation of the Screwball Genre in Gypped Comedies today use many of the screwball elements that have stood the test of time and resonate with audiences such as farcical situations, anti-heroes, role-play, and slapstick humor. Some elements have largely faded with the genre such as the fast-talking dizzy dames who instigate the subversion of normality of the male. From inception to completion, I strove to implement the styles and tropes of the screwball genre into my thesis film in homage to films like Bringing Up Baby and Some Like It Hot. Gypped implements most of the elements of the screwball genre, save for the likable hero and the somewhat outdated practice of fast-talking dialog. Instead of class issues, Gypped tackles the issue of sexual harassment. In the film, I set up a farcical situation where a Gypsy curses a chauvinistic man to a day of sexual harassment from women he encounters. This subversion of normality turns the stereotypes of gender roles on its axis. In a string of humiliating instances, the man is taken advantage of, groped, catcalled, and harassed in ways that are generally associated with deviant male behavior. He enters a world of eccentric women who adopt the worst qualities of male behavior. Under the gypsy’s spell, some of the women act more feminine as dizzy dames, unable to concentrate on anything but Tom. Others are more masculine and are aggressive, predatory, and bent on getting their way. 37 Gehring, Romantic Vs. Screwball Comedy, 53. 16 Figure 11.1 Figure 11.2 A police woman gropes Tom. An enamored waitress lays a kiss on Tom. Role-playing is an element used in Gypped. An urge to act like stereotypical chauvinistic men is foisted upon the women Tom encounters. It is a comedic contrast with the fundamental femaleness of the women. The comedy follows many of the same rules as in Some Like It Hot, which finds comedy in the unnaturalness of the main characters’ attempt to act female.38 They fool the characters on the screen, but their maleness is obvious to the audience. As the dizzy dame, Marilyn Monroe plays a perfect stereotype for Joe and Jerry to mimic, as she acts sexy and vulnerable and wears a form-fitting dress. The stereotype is easily recognized, easy to mimic, and therefore, easy to make jokes around that will get laughs from the audience. For example, Josephine and Daphne talk with their hands raised in front of them with limp wrists. In Gypped the women say or do rude things that the stereotypical male chauvinist pig is known for. An example of this is when Tom is surrounded by women in an alley and one of them says, “A pretty little thing like you could get lost in these parts.” 38 Scott, Comedy: the New Critical Idiom, 68. 17 Figure 11.3 “A pretty little thing like you could get lost in these parts.” The main character is attracted to a few women, but no romantic interest is pursued. An effort was made to focus on basic sexual attraction rather than romance. The insults and violence acted upon the main character run the course of the film in a ritualistic humiliation of the male. Once he apologizes and the gypsy sees that her daughter has fallen under the spell, she removes the curse and the battle of the sexes ends in a mutual agreement. In Gypped, it is up to the women to save Tom from his ignorant, chauvinistic way of life. They are the source of the ritualistic humiliation of the male. Tom is initially shown in a weak position as he is at the mercy of the mechanics. It only gets worse for him until he decides to apologize for his behavior. Whereas most screwball comedies take place in glamorous settings like nightclubs and mansions, Gypped is taken in the opposite direction. My thesis film takes place in unglamorous settings like a mechanic shop, a low-end diner, an alleyway, and a strip club. I wanted to place the main character in dirty and unwelcoming settings that are discomforting to both Tom and the audience. While these settings are not glamorous, they are treated with the same grandiose and 18 adventurous feel as in most screwball comedies. The strip club is lavishly lit and very colorful, the rural street he runs down is filled with people chasing him and the mechanic shop is filled with mysterious gypsy items. Figure 11.4 Figure 11.5 A strip club replaces the typical nightclub. A large crowd chases Tom down the street. The pratfalls and slapstick humor keeps with the ridiculous situations and energy of the genre. When Tom is bullied into dancing onstage by a female pimp, the vast amount of women watching his every move makes the absurdity of the situation humorous. Tom’s facial expressions and sight gags such as Tom jumping into a dumpster are essential to the genre. Figure 11.6 Figure 11.7 Excited women make Tom dance for money. Tom hides in a dumpster. In the spirit of screwball comedies, my film takes place in expansive locations and the shot design shows off the space using wide and normal lenses. Historically, screwball comedies take place in glamorous and elaborate settings like mansions or nightclubs. There are no glamorous settings in my film because I felt like the subject matter of sexism is not glamorous. I 19 instead portray a dirty town that Tom is traveling through. This is a metaphor for his mental state of mind. He sees his world as dirty and filthy. I do, however, include an expansive strip club that makes Tom feel small and exposed while he is dancing for the entertainment of a large group of women. Analysis of Gypped: Strengths and Weaknesses The scenes in Gypped that follow the screwball genre tend to be stronger than the ones that lack screwball elements. The scene where Tom hides from the policewoman in the restaurant has high energy and the comedy plays well. The humiliation that Tom endures is humorous and abundant. Not only is he discovered by the policewoman he was hiding from, a waitress hits on him, her boyfriend chases him away, and he runs into a homeless woman who tries to take off his pants. The stakes are raised in quick succession and keep the energy up. The eccentric screwball characters maintain the energy and serve the comedy well. Figure 12.1 Figure 12.2 A standoff ensues with Tom as the prize. A jealous boyfriend witnesses the kiss. The waitress serves as the dizzy dame in this scene. She is beside herself, enamored with Tom. She makes her claim to Tom by laying a surprise kiss on him, despite his struggle to get free. The slapstick humor is employed when the waitress’ boyfriend chases him out of the restaurant and Tom jumps into an open dumpster. Reveals are used effectively as payoffs to jokes set up earlier on. For example, while the waitress and her boyfriend are arguing in front of 20 a window inside the restaurant, Tom enters the frame outside on the sidewalk with the homeless woman attempting to take off his pants. Figure 12.3 Figure 12.4 A dizzy waitress experiences vertigo. Tom and homeless lady enter background. One of the weaker scenes is the one where Tom angers the mechanics to the point where he is cursed and chased off with a shotgun. This scene serves to set up the characters and the plot of the film, but it falters in the execution. The pacing is slow and the static shots do not provide much energy. The only character who has movement in their blocking is the gypsy’s daughter who walks off after getting a taro card reading from her mother. The other actors are blocked in a way that leaves them standing in one place for much of the scene. Figure 12.5 Figure 12.6 Scene lacks energy with static blocking. A mild reaction is uncharacteristic of genre. The screwball elements are not introduced until the inciting incident happens two minutes into the film. Without eccentric characters and slapstick humor, the only comedy the scene has to offer are a few reaction shots and the humiliation of the main character as he makes things 21 worse for himself by continuously angering the only people who can help him. A few reaction shots of Mom and Pop are humorous but their seemingly mild reactions to Tom’s disrespectful nature are not threatening enough to carry the humor. The visual storytelling is effective where Tom sees a picture of the family and makes the connection that the women he had made sexual remarks about are actually the mechanics’ daughters. These visual gags are effective, but do little to move the story forward until the inciting incident happens and the gypsy curses Tom. Figure 12.7 Figure 12.8 Papers fall to reveal Tom’s mistake. Tom immediately reacts in embarrassment. Gypped misses out on some commonly used slapstick shtick such as the late take and the double take that Laurel and Hardy first implemented in their slapstick films of the 1930s.39 Cary Grant is known for his use of the double take; however, in Bringing Up Baby, it is the supporting characters that use the gag. A drunk gardener does a double take when he sees the leopard and the chief of police is so easy to get off subject, he makes several late takes. In one instance, the chief is questioning David behind bars and does not realize David’s cell is open until David walks out and reenters with the chief in arm. 39 Moss, 19. Marilyn Ann. Giant: George Stevens, A Life on Film. Madison: (The University of Wisconsin Press, 2004), 22 In Some Like It Hot, Joe and Jerry agree that their aliases will be Josephine and Geraldine, but when they get dressed up and meet Sweet Sue, Jerry introduces himself as Daphne. Joe seems unbothered by this until he gets Jerry alone. “Daphne?” he growls at Jerry through clenched teeth. The comedy builds on the delayed reaction that the audience knows is coming. In Gypped, The reveal of the picture of the mechanic and his daughters is the joke, but if Tom had made a double take after seeing the photograph it would have made the reaction humorous as well. A late take would have worked well in the scene of where the male gas station attendant puts his hand on Tom’s hand in a flirtatious manner. As it is now, the attendant brings Tom’s hand up to his lips to kiss it, making Tom immediately react and drawing his hand away. The situation is humorous, but it could have been executed in a more humorous way if I had Tom do a double take before he removes his hand or if the attendant’s hand lingered on Tom’s hand and I cut to a close up of Tom for a late take. This would let the audience see the transition on Tom’s face from untroubled to horrified. The audience would be expecting Tom to react and they would be rewarded when Tom realizes the clerk’s intentions. Figure 12.9 Figure 12.10 Male gas station clerk flirts with Tom. Tom reacts too soon to build comedy. 23 Conclusion A filmmaker can make a stronger career move by better understanding the relationship between film language and the conventions of a genre. Studying film language and genre conventions adds tools to the filmmaker’s style and if implemented correctly, can help tell the story and raise production value. Because one of the goals is to make a profit, the wider appeal, the better. Furthermore, it is important to study the film language of a genre in order to effectively communicate the meaning of each shot. In comedy this often means designing shots to best serve the humor. To withhold information for a humorous reveal the filmmaker might cut from a tight shot to a wide shot or pan to reveal the joke that was hiding out of frame. Studying the screwball genre has helped me to understand and implement comedic conventions and film language into my thesis film and it is much stronger because of it. I will continue to research genre styles as I begin my film career and I strongly urge all filmmakers to do similarly in their careers. 24 Bibliography Armstrong, Richard. Billy W ilder, A merican Film Realist. Jefferson: McFarland & Company, Inc., 2000. Bordwell, David. On the History of Film Style. Cambridge: Havard University Press, 1997. Braudy, Leo. Great Film Directors. P-N. 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New York: St. Martin, 1996. 25 Filmography • It Happened One Night (USA, Frank Capra, 1934) • 20th Century (USA, Howard Hawks, 1934) • Some Like It Hot (USA, Billy Wilder, 1959) • W hat’s Up, Doc (USA, Peter Bogdanovich, 1972) • Dirty Rotten Scoundrels (USA, Frank Oz, 1988) • Notting Hill (USA, Roger Michell, 1999) • A merican Sweethearts (USA, Joe Roth, 2001) • Bringing Down the House (USA, Adam Shankman, 2003) • Bringing Up Baby (USA, Howard Hawks, 1938) • My Man Godfrey (USA, Gregory La Cava, 1936) • The Lady Eve (USA, Preston Sturges, 1941) • His Girl Friday (USA, Howard Hawks, 1940)