- DeSales University
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- DeSales University
De Sales University Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines Introduction Every communication, print or electronic, published and mailed by University departments represents DeSales University to its various constituencies. Each piece affects the image of DeSales both internally and externally. To maintain a consistent, high-quality image, the communications department has produced this manual to ensure adherence to specific publications guidelines. These guidelines create a unity of appearance and consistency of editorial treatment in all pieces, whether produced in print or electronically, that are published and distributed by DeSales University. All questions concerning these guidelines should be directed to Tom McNamara, executive director of communications, extension 1219 or tom.mcnamara@desales.edu. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 3 Visual Identity Guidelines LOGO DEFINITION The University’s logo is BOTH the book/ gothic church window icon (or “mark” ) and the words “DeSales University” (the “wordmark”). The mark captures many features of the Catholic tradition. The book not only reminds us of the knowledge that is characteristic of a university, but also relates to the great works written by St. Francis de Sales. He was named a Doctor of the Church because of these spiritual classics. Subtle visual metaphors include: a flame, a bishop’s miter, a priestly stole, and an implied human form with outstretched arms. The logo reflects the University’s Catholic, humanistic philosophy while expressing ongoing commitment to higher education and the spirit and mission of St. Francis de Sales and St. Jane de Chantal. REPRODUCING THE LOGO The DeSales University logo has carefully crafted customized artwork and type. As such, the University requires that electronic files or camera-ready art must be used to create the logo for all forms of communication, signage, and vehicle graphics. Any attempt to re-create the art, type, or spacing and styling of the logo by desktop publishing or word processing will result in inconsistencies that will compromise the integrity of the logo. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 5 LOGO ELEMENTS There are only two configurations of the DeSales University logo. They are shown below. These elements MUST NOT be repositioned: 6 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines INCORRECT LOGO USAGES To ensure visual consistency and promote recognition, the DeSales University logo must not be altered in any way. The illustrations below demonstrate many, but not all, incorrect uses of the logo. (These rules apply to both versions of the logo.) ����������������������������� ���������������������������������� ����������������������������� ��������������� ������������������������������� ������������������������������� DeSales University �������������������������� A note on outside vendors: Sometimes vendors who are reproducing the University’s logo will ask for the “font of the logo” to see if they can match it.The wordmark type can not be matched. Please direct the vendor to contact the communications office for the correct logo and format. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 7 COLORS When the logo is used in two colors, those two colors must always be the University’s red (Pantone 200) and blue (Pantone 295). The mark must be red and the wordmark must be blue. The logo can appear as one color, i.e., black, navy, red, green, etc., but BOTH the mark and the wordmark must be the same color. ������� ��������� ��������� ������� ������� ������� ������� ��������� ������� 8 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines THE UNIVERSITY SEAL Use of the official seal is typically reserved for formal and official documents, such as diplomas, certificates, and official records.The seal should not be used as an alternative to the DeSales University logo. The Coat of Arms of DeSales University is symbolic acknowledgement of those sources that have contributed to its origin and existence: the Oblates of St. Francis de Sales and the Diocese of Allentown. Insignia pertaining to the Diocese of Allentown and its first bishop, the Most Rev. Joseph McShea, D.D., who was a prime mover in conceiving the idea of the University, appear on the left side of the shield. The two fleurs-de-lis are a means of honoring Pope John XXIII, who established the Diocese in 1961. A bar encircled by a ring symbolize Saint Catherine of Siena, the titular saint of the diocesan cathedral. The ring designates her mystical marriage to Christ. Bishop McShea’s service to the See of Peter Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 9 in the Roman Curia and in the Apostolic Delegation in Washington, D.C., are recalled through the reverse cross on which St. Peter died. As a religious Congregation, the Oblates trace their spirit and philosophy to Francis de Sales, the saintly 17th century Bishop and Doctor of the Church. The symbols—a crescent and two stars—which appear on the right side of the shield, attest to this close association. They are, in fact, taken from the de Sales family coat of arms and commemorate the 13th century crusade victory of Francis de Sales ancestor, Pierre de Sales, over Turks at Rhodes. A prominent cross at the very center of the shield, the Latin phrase “Tenui nec dimittam,” 10 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines and the abbreviation “VJ” are additions provided from the Oblate tradition. “Tenui nec dimittam” is a biblical phrase rich in meaning. Roughly translated, it reads, “I have taken hold of him and will not let go,” a tenacious statement of Oblate determination to hold fast to God’s love and to persevere in God’s work, in spite of all obstacles, because of this love. The cross draws attention to the University’s Christ-centered philosophy, an outlook best described as “Christian humanism.” Finally, the “VJ” is an abbreviation for the French declaration “Vive Jesus,” the Oblate motto summoning all to “Live Jesus”: to reproduce Christ’s life and actions in their own lives. Editorial Style GENERAL EDITORIAL STYLE GUIDELINES Stylistic consistency lets the reader concentrate on the content without being distracted by variations in spelling and punctuation from one page to the next. It is an invaluable tool for editors, who often edit material intended for a single publication but written by several people. Having a style guide to consult keeps editors from having to reinvent a rule every time a new publication (or a new writer) comes along. Adhering to an agreed-upon style gives each campus publication a “voice” that harmonizes with those from other departments and offices. This style guide was assembled to provide guidelines for grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage in materials produced by DeSales University. The Chicago Manual of Style, 15th edition, is our primary reference, as well as the Oxford Modern English Dictionary. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 11 a, an Use “a” before words that begin with consonant sounds; use “an” before vowel sounds. an eight-year average an M.B.A. a historic event abbreviations Abbreviations of degrees, expressions of time, and names of countries take periods with no space between the elements. M.F.A., p.m., U.K. In abbreviations of organizations omit the period unless the result would spell an unrelated word. OSFS, NATO, FBI Plural forms of acronyms receive an “s” and no apostrophe. The committee was made up of CEOs. See second reference. 12 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines academic degrees Use periods with no spaces for academic degrees B.A., B.S., Ed.D., M.A., M.S., Ph.D., J.D., M.B.A. Put an apostrophe in bachelor’s degree and master’s degree. This is to show possession. The degree belongs to the bachelor or master. Even when shortened to bachelor’s and master’s (no “degree” afterward), keep the apostrophe. academic departments Capitalize the formal names of academic departments. Department of Natural Science Department of Humanities Do not capitalize names of academic departments that begin with the subject. natural science department, business department. See academic majors, academic programs. academic majors Lowercase academic majors except proper nouns. history, biology, English, marriage and family studies academic titles Capitalize titles only when preceding a name; otherwise, use lower case. Before a name, give a person only one title. Do not use phrases such as “Provost and Vice President for Academic Affairs Karen D. Walton.” Instead, use “Provost Karen D. Walton, who is also vice president of academic affairs, gave the keynote address.” Very long titles are more readable when placed after a name. Fr. Thomas Dailey, OSFS, director of the Salesian Center for Faith and Culture, delivered the presentation. acronyms See abbreviations and second reference. addresses Use periods with compass directions: S.W., N.E., W., E. Spell out names of numbered streets through nine; use numerals for 10 and greater: Fifth, Ninth, 10th, 52nd, 108th. Spell out avenue, boulevard, and street unless space is at a premium. Maintain consistency within the document (i.e., do not mix spelledout addresses with abbreviated addresses). adviser, advisor Advisor is the preferred choice in academia. affect, effect Ninety-nine times out of 100, if the word you use is a verb, spell it with an “a,” and if it is a noun, spell it with an “e.” In these two uses, affect means to influence and effect means the result of an action—and those are the most common uses. How will this affect (try substituting the word “influence”) my grade? I don’t know what the effect (try substituting the word “result”) will be. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 13 alumna, alumnae, alumni, alumnus alumna - singular, female alumnae - plural, female alumnus - singular, male alumni - plural, male, or male and female alum - singular, male or female; appropriate in informal contexts For alumni class identification, see class identification. ages Ages follow the rule of numbers: Ages between zero and nine should be spelled out; numbers greater than 10 should be written as figures. If ages are expressed as adjectives before a noun or as substitutes for a noun, use hyphens. The child is two years old. He just turned 15. She’s a three-year-old child. a lot not alot a.m., p.m. not AM or A.M. Recognize that “8 p.m. tonight” is redundant. Write “8 tonight,” or “8 p.m. today.” Use noon and midnight. among, between Use between to describe the direct relationship or comparison of two items or people. When more than two persons or things are involved, use “among.” The students could choose between two majors. Journalism was among the majors chosen. ampersand (&) Should be avoided in text. In company names, when an ampersand is used, the serial comma is omitted. Dewey, Cheatum & Howe assure See ensure, insure, assure. 14 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines asterisk (*) Use to indicate footnoted material. Asterisks (as with all footnote symbols) follow punctuation marks and go inside parentheses. benefit, benefited, benefiting Just one “t” buildings and other landmarks Proper names of buildings and places on campus: Alacoque Campus Ministry Center Aviat Hall Billera Hall Brisson Dance Studio Brisson Hall Buckley House Butz Baseball Field Campbell Hall Chappuis Hall Conmy Hall Connelly Chapel DeChantal Hall DeSales University Center (second reference, University Center) Dooling Hall Fasching Track Fromentin House Gerald White Pavilion Iacocca TV/Film Studios Isenring Center Jacquier Center for the Pennsylvania Shakespeare Festival (second reference, Jacquier Center) Labuda Center for the Performing Arts (second reference, Labuda Center) Lawless Center Marechaux House McShea Student Center Our Lady of Deliverance Priscilla Payne Hurd Science Center (second reference, Hurd Science Center) Salesian Center for Faith and Culture (second reference, Salesian Center) Tocik Hall Trexler Library Tucker House University Heights Wills Hall Welsh Hall Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 15 campuswide cancel, cancelable, canceled, canceling, cancellation capitalization Official names are capitalized; unofficial, informal, shortened, or generic names are not. Avoid using ALL CAPS in headlines or text. Phrases such as “the center,” “the institute” or “the recently renovated museum” are not capitalized. the Office of Admissions and Financial Aid the registrar’s office the Trexler Library; the library Capitalize University when referring to DeSales University The University recently celebrated its 40th anniversary Capitalize official names of bulletins, forms, conventions, conferences, classes, and so on. Dr. Mooney will teach the Comparative Literature class next semester. 16 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines Capitalize prepositions or conjunctions of four or more letters in headlines or titles. Secrets From the Center of the World capitol, capital Capitalize when referring to the building. “Capitol building” is redundant. Capital refers to the city as well as referring to a fund-raising campaign. The Capitol is in Harrisburg, which is the capital city of Pennsylvania. DeSales raised $16 million in a recent capital campaign. century Lower case when used with a number: 20th century, 21st century. cities Do not use state designations with these U.S. cities: Anchorage Baltimore Boston Cincinnati Atlanta Boise Chicago Cleveland Denver Honolulu Indianapolis Miami New Orleans Oklahoma City Pittsburgh Salt Lake City San Francisco Detroit Houston Los Angeles Minneapolis New York Philadelphia St. Louis San Diego Seattle class identification (by graduation year) John Smith ’71 Jane Smith M’98 (an alumna of one of our graduate programs) Mary Ann Summers P’92 (a parent of a 1992 graduate) Do not put commas after person’s name or after the degree. You may need to “trick” the software program to get the correct apostrophe before the year. (The correct apostrophe curls to the left) Simply hit the apostrophe key twice then delete the first one typed. Mike Joyce ‘87 (Incorrect) Mike Joyce ’87 (Correct) co Retain the hyphen when forming nouns, adjectives, and verbs that indicate occupation or status. co-author, co-chairman, co-defendant, co-partner, co-pilot, co-signer, co-star, co-worker Use no hyphen in other combinations. coed, coeducation, coexist, coexistence, cooperate, cooperative, coordinate, coordination (Cooperate, coordinate, and related words are exceptions to the rule that a hyphen is used if a prefix ends in a vowel and the word that follows begins with the same vowel.) commas Use a comma before the “and” or other conjunctions in a series. She helped review scholarships, grants, and financial aid. She sorted the boxes by color, size and weight, and type of material. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 17 committee names Capitalize the names of committees. The Academic Affairs Committee will meet on Thursday. compound modifiers (phrasal adjectives) Hyphenate compounds that precede a noun to prevent misreading. small-state senators a high-quality paint a middle-class neighborhood the neighborhood is middle class. (Hyphenated before but not after a noun.) Compounds formed by an adverb ending in “ly” plus an adjective or participle are not hyphenated either before or after a noun because ambiguity is virtually impossible. largely irrelevant smartly dressed Compounds formed with prefixes are normally closed, whether they are nouns, verbs, adjectives, or adverbs. 18 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines antebellum, antenatal, antediluvian bioecology, biophysical, biosociology counterclockwise, counterrevolution cyberspace, cyberstore, minivan, minimarket comprise, comprises “Comprise” and “comprises” must always refer to a larger unit made up of smaller units. Do not use “is comprised of.” The faculty committee comprises members from each department. See compose/comprise. compose, comprise “Compose” means to make up or constitute. “Comprise” is similar to include, contain, or consist of. Nine players compose a baseball team. A baseball team comprises one pitcher, one catcher, one shortstop, and so on. continuous(ly), continual(ly) “Continuous(ly)” means without interruption or unbroken; “continual(ly)” means occurring again and again. The snow fell continuously all evening. It will snow continually in January and February. contractions Avoid using contractions in formal writing. couple Considered plural The couple live in Whitehall, Pa. course load, coursework courses (titles of) Use caps and lowercase with course titles. Do not italicize or enclose in quotation marks. Example: Introduction to Fiction cum laude, magna cum laude, summa cum laude See degrees with distinction. dash vs. hyphen The size of the en and em dashes is roughly equivalent to the width of the lowercase n and m, respectively, for the typeface in which they are used. En dashes (–) are primarily for showing duration or range 9:00–5:00, 112–600, March 15–31 Create en dashes on a Mac by holding the option key, then type the hyphen key. On a PC, hold down the ALT key and type 0150 on the numeric keypad. Em dashes (—) are the proper dashes to use in place of single or double hyphens(--) as punctuation. Similar to a parenthetical phrase (like this) the em dash sets apart clauses in a sentence—like this. Create em dashes on a Mac by holding the shift key, the option key, and then type the hyphen key. On a PC, hold down the ALT key and type 0151 on the numeric keypad. database Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 19 days/dates When referring to month, date, and year, add a comma before and after the year unless it ends the sentence. However, do not add a comma following the month unless a date is used. Similarly, when referring to both a city and state, add a comma after the state. Your memo of November 28, 2001, summarized the issue perfectly. She graduated in May 2002. After three years, she started to consider Center Valley, Pennsylvania, home. The common rule for publications is to use the days of the week (e.g., Monday, Tuesday) when referring to events within seven days, before or after the publication date. When writing about events more distant, use months and dates, such as “April 30” and “June 5.” Do not use both. Do not use yesterday, today, and tomorrow. Do not use 1st, 2nd, etc., with dates: July 21, April 2, etc. (not July 21st, April 2nd, etc.) 20 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines Use the year if not the current calendar year. Periods of years: He worked from 1949 to 1961. He worked in 1949-50 (if academic year). He worked in the 1950s (if a decade); avoid ‘50s See also months. dean’s list degrees See academic degrees. degrees with distinction Do not capitalize, but use italics. cum laude, magna cum laude, and summa cum laude departments See academic departments. DeSales, DE SALES When “DeSales” is set in both upper and lower case letters, there is no space between “De” and “Sales.” If the University’s name is set in all caps, insert a space. DeSales University DE SALES UNIVERSITY dimensions Use figures for all numbers that indicate height, weight, width, etc., even for numbers less than 10. Spell out inches, feet, yards, etc., to indicate depth, height, length, and width. Hyphenate adjectival forms before nouns. The book weighs 2 pounds, she is 5 feet 4 inches tall, the 5-foot-4-inch woman. Use a hash mark to indicate feet and straight quote marks to indicate inches (5'4") only in very technical contexts. directions and regions Capitalize when referring to regions. When referring to compass directions, such as “I am walking north,” then lower case them. The Northeastern Pennsylvania area is growing rapidly. dollar amounts Use a dollar sign followed by a numeral. Do not use .00 with dollar values. $250 (not $250.00), $12,300, $5.3 million dorm, dormitory Avoid; use “residence hall.” e.g. exempli gratia: for example This abbreviation should be used only in parenthetical phrases, where it is punctuated with periods and set off with commas. Do not use etc. at the end of a phrase beginning with e.g. The University offers several majors (e.g., biology, accounting, liberal studies). Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 21 ellipsis The ellipsis (…) replaces a word or phrase and should be treated like a word, and that means placing a space before and after the punctuation. If an ellipsis comes at the end of the sentence, there should be a fourth dot—the period. Create an ellipsis by holding down the option key and typing a semicolon. e-mail Use hyphen; lowercase “e” unless at the beginning of a sentence. emeritus, emerita A retired male professor may earn “emeritus” status; a retired female professor would earn “emerita” status. Harry Warren, emeritus professor of chemistry Professor Emerita Caroline Hollshwandnerer ensure, insure, assure Use ensure to mean guarantee or make certain. Steps were taken to ensure the document’s accuracy. 22 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines Use insure for references to the characteristics of insurance. The policy will insure your home. Use assure to give confidence or to inform positively. She assured him that the decision was a wise one. extensions, phone Use a comma after the phone number and the lower case abbreviation. 610.282.1100, ext. 1219 farther, further Farther refers to physical distance: He walked farther in the woods. Further refers to an extension of time or degree: She will look further into the mystery. fewer, less Use fewer for things that you can count. I have fewer quarters than you do. (You can count, “One quarter, two quarters, three quarters.”) Use less for things you cannot count. I have less cash than you do. (You don’t say, “One cash, two cash, three cash.”) faculty Usually considered plural. The faculty are dedicated to their students. figures When a text refers to numbered graphs or tables, refer to them in the text as Figure 1, Figure 2, etc., and italicize. On the figure itself, the label (Figure 1, Figure 2, etc.) does not need to be italicized. Note: Figures in an appendix should be designated according to the letter of the appendix: Figure A-1, Figure B-6, etc. fund raising, fund-raising fund raising when used as a noun; fund-raising when used as an adjective grade point average Use GPA on second reference. grades Use letter grade with no quotation marks. Plural grades have no apostrophe. She received an A in the course. There is a W on his transcript. She earned three Bs and two Cs. health care (noun), health-care (adj.) home page homework hyphen See dashes vs. hyphens first-come, first-served They will be seated on a first-come, first-served basis. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 23 i.e. id est: that is Used for listing the specific case(s) referred to in the preceding material. Should be punctuated with periods and set off with commas. Please state your response (i.e., yes or no). initials Do not separate with a space: T.L. Smith in order to, in order for Delete “in order,” which is generally unnecessary insure See ensure, insure, assure. internet Lowercase. Use internet instead of “net” or “the net.” judgment Not judgement 24 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines junior (Jr.), senior (Sr.), III Jr., Sr., and III are not set off by commas. Tom Green Jr. is a member of the Class of 1969. His son is Tom Green III. kickoff (n.), kick-off (adj.), kick off (v.) lay, lie Lay means “to put” or “to place.” It requires an object to complete its meaning. Principal forms are: lay, laid, laying. Please lay the boxes there. I laid the message on the table. Lie means “to recline, rest, or stay” or “to take a position of rest.” It refers to a person or thing as either assuming or being in a reclining position. This verb cannot take an object. Principal forms are lie, lay, lain, lying. He’s been ill and lies in bed all day. The mail is lying on the secretary’s desk. Hint: In deciding whether to use lie or lay in a sentence, substitute the word place, placed, or placing (as appropriate) for the word in question. If the substitute fits, the corresponding form of lay is correct; if it doesn’t, use the appropriate form of lie. legal cases The names of legal cases (plaintiff and defendant) are usually italicized. Miranda v. Arizona Green v. Department of Public Welfare legislature Capitalize this noun in all references to a particular legislative body, such as “the Pennsylvania Legislature,” which can also be referred to as “the Legislature.” Do not capitalize “legislature” when it is used as a generic term. The law-making body in a democracy is called a legislature. lifestyle -ly rule If the first of two consecutive modifiers ends in -ly, do not separate with a hyphen. It’s a newly created program. See also compound adjectives Macintosh, MacIntosh Macintosh: the computer made by the Apple company. MacIntosh: the fruit, also a stereo manufacturer in the United Kingdom. majors See academic majors. MasterCard Not Master Card mid- to late [month] The report will arrive in mid- to late November. money See dollar amounts. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 25 months Never abbreviate months when they do not immediately precede a date. We were married in September last year. However, when the name of a month immediately precedes a date, abbreviate it, but only if the month’s name is six letters or longer. We began this project on Aug. 6 last year and finished on March 5. multicultural names of people In first reference, use the individual’s full name. Leave out middle initial unless they prefer to use it or if it is used in a formal context. In subsequent sentences, use last names only. First reference: Jack London; Second reference: London First reference: Dr. Yuri Zhivago Second reference: Zhivago 26 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines First reference: Ray Parker Jr.; Second reference: Parker First reference: Marcia Gay Harden; Second reference: Harden First reference: Catherine Zeta-Jones; Second reference: Zeta-Jones Nicknames generally should be avoided but when used enclose them in quotation marks. none If the object of the preposition after none is singular, use a singular verb; likewise, if the object of the preposition after the verb is plural, use a plural verb. None of the day was wasted. None of us were alert. nonprofit (n., adj.) Also not-for-profit. noon Use noon or 12 p.m. Not “12:00 noon.” numbers Spell out whole numbers below 10, use numbers for 10 and above. They had three sons and two daughters. They had a fleet of 10 station wagons and two buses. Numbers should never begin a sentence. Spell out regardless of the number or reword the sentence. One hundred and fifty people attended the lecture. A total of 150 people attended the lecture. Use a comma with numerals of 1,000 and above (except dates): 5,000 42,000 Use numerals when referring to percentages: He won by 5 percent. See also percentages and dimensions. offline online over, under “Over” and “under” should only be used in reference to location, not quantity. Use “more than” or “less than.” More than 425 freshman deposited this year. Registering for a wedding should take less than 4 hours. The dogs are under the kitchen table. Use numerals when referring to academic credit: The student earned 3 hours of credit. Use numerals when referring to a page number: The passage begins on page 5. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 27 percentages In text, spell out percent; use the percent sign (%) in tables and graphics; use numerals with percents. 7 percent phone numbers Use periods; do not use parentheses or hyphens: 610.282.1100. Omit the 1 in all long-distance numbers, including toll-free numbers: 877.4.DESALES 610.282.1100, ext. 1219 p.m. See a.m., p.m. postbaccalaureate pre In general, do not hyphenate: preapproved, preset, prework. (Exceptions: predental, pre-law, pre-med, pre-vet.) 28 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines programs See academic programs. quotations marks Set quotation marks outside of periods and commas. “Education is important,” he said. Dana’s favorite song is “Rock Me Amadeus.” quote marks vs. hash marks (or smart quotes vs. dumb quotes) Typographers quotes (the ones that curl) should be used in all text except for denoting measurements, which require the straight quotes, (or hash marks) “She was 5'2" with eyes of blue,” said Jeremy. ratios Use figures and a hyphen a ratio of 2-to-1, a 2-1 ratio. re In general, do not hyphenate: reedit, reunify, reestablish. residence hall Not dormitory or dorm. RSVP Not R.S.V.P. Recognize that “Please RSVP” is redundant. seasons, semesters Lowercase the names of seasons: fall, winter, spring, summer, Uppercase specific semesters: Fall 2007, Spring 2004 second reference Well-known abbreviations are acceptable on second reference. Thus, Internal Revenue Service can become “the IRS” the second time you refer to it. Avoid using unfamiliar abbreviations. If you are writing about the Interfaith Recycling Society, refrain from referring to it as IRS on second reference. Instead, call it “the association” or “the group.” senior (Sr.), junior (Jr.), III Do not set off with a comma following a name. senior citizens Avoid seniors, which may cause confusion with fourth-year students in some contexts. since, because “Since” only refers to time. Use “because” instead. Because we were late, we missed our flight. Since 1989, the overall quality of popular music has declined. spaces Use one space after periods, commas, or colons when typing text. staff Usually considered plural. The staff have reviewed the student’s document. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 29 state names Spell out the names of the 50 U.S. state when they stand alone in textual material. If a city is written with a state, abbreviate the state name using the textual abbreviations. Use the postal abbreviation only if the zip code is needed. Brian is from Jackson, Mo. Send the letter to 205 Crescent Avenue, Jenkintown, PA 19046 Abbreviation Postal code Alabama Ala. AL Alaska Alaska AK Arizona Ariz. AZ Arkansas Ark. AR California Calif. CA Colorado Colo. CO Connecticut Conn. CT Delaware Del. DE Dist. of Columbia D.C. DC Florida Fla. FL Georgia Ga. GA Hawaii Hawaii HI Idaho Idaho ID Illinois Ill. IL 30 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines Indiana Iowa Kansas Kentucky Louisiana Maine Maryland Massachusetts Michigan Minnesota Mississippi Missouri Montana Nebraska Nevada New Hampshire New Jersey New Mexico New York North Carolina North Dakota Ohio Oklahoma Oregon Pennsylvania Ind. Iowa Kans. Ky. La. Maine Md. Mass. Mich. Minn. Miss. Mo. Mont. Nebr. Nev. N.H. N.J. N.M. N.Y. N.C. N.D. Ohio Okla. Ore. Pa. IN IA KS KY LA ME MD MA MI MN MS MO MT NE NV NH NJ NM NY NC ND OH OK OR PA Puerto Rico Rhode Island South Carolina South Dakota Tennessee Texas Utah Vermont Virginia Virgin Islands Washington West Virginia Wisconsin Wyoming P.R. R.I. S.C. S.D. Tenn. Tex. Utah Vt. Va. V.I. Wash. W.Va. Wis. Wyo. PR RI SC SD TN TX UT VT VA VI WA WV WI WY temperature Use figures unless the temperature is zero. It is minus 5 degrees. I hope it warms to 9 or 10 degrees. that, which That is used to introduce an “essential” clause, and which is used before a “nonessential” clause. The difference between the two is that the essential clause cannot be eliminated without changing the meaning of the sentence. Also, an essential clause must not be set off from the rest of the sentence by commas, while a clause beginning with which should be set off with commas. This is a course that is both informative and enjoyable. His first book, which is titled Plato Revisited, is riveting. theatre Not theater through not thru time of day Use a colon to separate hour from minutes. 11:00 a.m. and 3:30 p.m.; 5:30-8:30 p.m. (in listings); from 5:30 to 8:30 p.m. (in text); noon, midnight (not 12 noon or 12 midnight, or 12 a.m. or 12 p.m.); 7 o’clock (not 7 O’clock); and six-thirty, seven-fifteen (in formal invitations). Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 31 time zones When spelled out, designations of time zones are lowercased, except for proper nouns. Abbreviations are capitalized. central standard time (CST) daylight saving time (DST) eastern standard time (EST) Greenwich mean time (GMT) titles of people Capitalize formal titles before a name or names. President Bernard O’Connor Dean Deborah Booros Professor Steve Myers Lowercase formal titles after a name or names. Bernard O’Connor, president Deb Booros, dean of ACCESS Steve Myers, professor of English Lowercase titles standing alone. the president the dean 32 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines titles of works Use italics with: Books (title alone is normally sufficient; no need to reference publisher, year, etc.) CDs or albums Movies and plays Major musical compositions Newspapers Paintings, drawings, statues, and other works of art Periodicals (journals and magazines) Radio Programs (All Things Considered) Television Series (Law and Order, Green Acres) Use quotation marks with: Articles Dissertation titles Episodes of TV shows (“The One Where Rachel Finds Out” or “Gilligan Meets Jungle Boy”) Papers (e.g., papers presented at conferences) Songs Stories Do not use italics, underlining, or quotation marks (but use appropriate capitalization) with: Courses Events Lectures Symposia toward Not towards. trademarks A reasonable effort should be made to capitalize trademarked names. The symbols © and ™ need not be used in running text. Coca-Cola (but cola drink) Frisbee Kleenex Pyrex dishes Xerox underserved under way United States (n.); U.S. (adj.) Abbreviate it as “U.S.” only as an adjective before a noun U.S. hockey team U.S. economy U.S. bonds; Otherwise, spell it out I love the United States. University Capitalize University when referring to DeSales University The University recently celebrated its 40th anniversary usage/use It is preferable to use “usage” only with reference to language, and use “use” in other instances. Avoid “utilize.” The Japanese student’s usage of English was impeccable. Computer use at DeSales is up 20 percent. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 33 video conferencing Two words. Do not use as a verb. vice president No hyphen. Visa (the credit card) Not VISA. web site Also web page, web browser which See that, which. workers’ compensation World Wide Web In web site addresses (URLs), use http:// only if the address does not start with “www.” http://bb.desales.edu www.desales.edu 34 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines years To indicate a decade, add an “s.” to the first year in the decade. Disco was introduced in the 1970s. If you abbreviate this, do it this way: In the ’70s, people danced “The Hustle.” Do not use an apostrophe before the “s.” (wrong: 1960’s) Publication Design Tips The communications department can assist you from the idea stage to the printed piece. We will help you create your piece, choose paper, help with photos, and work with a printer. Printed items, brochures, and other publications that do not meet DeSales University standards will be redone at the expense of the department that created them. If you decide to produce a publication yourself, it is still in your best interest to consult with the communications office in the planning stages. In discussing your project, you may learn some tips that will save you frustration and money. Keep the following in mind when designing a document for publication. For a professional look, simple designs are best. Choose a few elements and use them consistently. This will help you achieve a cleaner, more readable look. Regardless of the manner in which your publications are produced, all materials must be approved by the communications office before printing. Publications that require approval include materials prepared for external distribution as well as any item with the DeSales University logo. WORKING WITH TEXT When selecting type, two fonts should be sufficient—one for your body text and one for headlines. More than two can clutter the page, making it look amateurish and difficult to read. Use bold and italics for emphasis and variation. The communications department recommends the use of the typeface Bembo Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 35 for text. However, Times New Roman is a good substitute. Both Bembo and Times New Roman are a serif fonts, meaning they have short lines extending from the body of the letters. Serif fonts are recommended for body copy because they are easier to read. Sans serif fonts do not have the short lines, making it difficult for the reader to distinguish certain letters. Sans serif fonts are best used in headlines or in pullout quotes in the text. The size of the body type should usually be between 9 and 12 points. With an older audience, the type size should be 11 or 12 point. The type size should be consistent throughout the document. Avoid the temptation to use a smaller point size to squeeze in a paragraph at the end of a page. Doing so can make the document look unprofessional. Establish a hierarchy for your headlines so that all of the same level heads are in the same point 36 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines size. Consistency in headings makes the piece easier to read and helps to convey important points. The spacing above and below the headings, as well as the captions and artwork, should be the same throughout the document. When a heading falls at the bottom of a column or page, be sure to include at least two lines of text with the heading. Otherwise, move the heading to the next column or page. Certain type elements should be used sparingly— all caps, reversed type, italics, underlining, and boldface. These elements should be used for emphasis. Too much underlining or too much boldface causes the eye to see the underline or the boldface but not the rest of the text. Better to edit or rewrite for stronger text. Let the words carry the message. Use visual devices sparingly. Lists and bullets are helpful for highlighting information; be careful of overusing other dingbats, typographical symbols, or ornaments. These, too, can clutter a page. One strong image is more effective than many little icons. Type that is angled, put in irregularly shaped blocks, or broken across an illustration is difficult to read. Because people read from left to right, any divergence from that pattern immediately sets up a visual roadblock. Optimum column width is approximately three inches. For ease of reading, text should be set in columns with sufficient space between the columns. Two, three, and four columns are standard. Use only one space after punctuation, not two as people used to with a typewriter. Also avoid widows. A widow is a word or syllable isolated at the bottom of a column or paragraph or at the top of a column. Usually, these can be corrected through editing. A ragged right margin will give you better word spacing and fewer hyphens. A rule of thumb is no more than three hyphens in a row at the end of a line. Do not rely on spell check for proofreading. Spell check will not pick up incorrect usage. For example, it will not distinguish between the words to and two—the words can be spelled correctly but may be used incorrectly in the context of the brochure. PAGE LAYOUT Balance and proportion are the keys to page layout. It is important to consider the overall look of the page and its relationship to the opposite page. A page with solid type looks gray. Use subheadings to break it up.Vary the sentence length and keep the paragraphs short. Use white space to give the eye somewhere to rest. Boxes, borders, and rules create visual interest when used in moderation. But keep it simple. A single rule box is preferable to a more complex one. A hairline rule between type columns also may work. A color printed behind the text can add emStyle Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 37 phasis, but be careful not to sacrifice readability. If there is a lot of type, use a screen value of no more than 10 or 20 percent. Clip art offers graphic possibilities, but make sure it is appropriate to the publication and the font. Cutesy clip art makes the piece and, by extension, the program or subject described in the publication look less professional. COLOR If you can afford only one color of ink, it is tempting to use a color like purple, green, or red. This is fine as long as the color is dark enough to be read and as long as you are not printing photographs. Photographs, particularly photographs of people, that print in purple, green, or red can look unnatural. They can also create the impression that you did not have enough money to print in two colors of ink. Generally, when printing one color of ink, it is better to choose from dark, neutral shades such as black, brown, grey, etc. 38 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines Sources East Carolina University Publications Manual. East Carolina University, 2000. University of Chicago Press. The Chicago Manual of Style. 15th ed. Chicago: University of Chicago Press, 2003. Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines • 39 40 • Style Manual & Visual Identity Guidelines