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National Council for the Training of Journalists National Council for the Training of Journalists This is to certify that James Dean Garside has obtained a Level 3 Diploma in Journalism and has been awarded credit for the following units: T/602/4244 K/602/4239 H/602/4238 Y/602/4236 L/602/4234 D/602/4237 K/602/4242 J/602/4233 Level 3 Level 3 Level 3 Level 3 Level 3 Level 3 Level 3 Level 3 Issue date: 31 July 2012 15 15 20 9 9 7 7 7 credits credits credits credits credits credits credits credits Teeline Shorthand for Journalists 60wpm News Reporting D Multimedia Portfolio for Journalists B Essential Public Affairs for Journalists C Essential Media Law for Journalists A Media Law Court Reporting B Production Journalism B Business of Magazines A Candidate URN: 134576 (jm~ Joanne Butcher Chief Executive Regulated by NCTJ Training Ltd QN. 501/1103/6 OfQUQl ' Llywodraeth Cymru Welsh Government /S Rewarding Learning 1193 ■ net National Council for the Training of Journalists Diploma in Journalism This is to certify that James Dean Garside has achieved the following: Shorthand at 60 wpm Joanne Butcher Chief Executive Pass 11 May 2012 NCTJ Training All seven preliminary certificates must be achieved, including 100wpm shorthand, to be eligible for the National Certificate Examination DIPLOMA IN JOURNALISM PORTFOLIO A record of training and experience Name: :3fcW£^....& Centre: 3I2L&^ w w w. n c t j . c o m w All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in any retrievable system or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording or otherwise, without the prior permission of the National Council for the Training of Journalists. © National Council for the Training of Journalists 2011/2012 net STUDENT DETAILS TO BE RETAINED IN THE PORTFOLIO N a m e ^ J r M ! E S . . . ( 3 r B ^ S . ( . S ^ r. D a t e o f b \ x V t x ^ M . 1 . 9 . ^ . 1 . I I . ~ 7 Home address^STI/±T^!^^ .f^feT3^/.C-*335^^ ~ ^ ~ 3uaJ&&.3LOte!GHl./>2£:. Postcode:..y^f7.C2...^..0/(^Home telephone: 1MB Mobile:.Q77^77^^^^^<^<7 Centoe:..<Z?GxMJMr^^ Course h«*n.J0i/U!kO/.&^./^ Course dates:.....[.<£>/.(../.. 1 <Z....ZZ ^/ Employer (if applicable): Address: Postcode: Diploma in Journalism mandatory exams: dates and results (if known) Reporting E s s e n t i a l P u b l i c A ff a i r s . . . . ! 2 j 4 r. / ^ / . . l . ^ r. S ^ r. Essential Media Lavi.../2rrA../.3.J.l^Lr. jRf Shorthand speeds achieved: dates and results (if known) NCTJ shorthand exams: 60 wpm: ..i|./S././.^..P.a5^ 70 wpm: 80 wpm: ^y 90 wpm: 100 wpm: 110 wpm: 120 wpm: Portfolio date submitted and result (if known) Diploma in Journalism Specialist Options: dates and results (if known) Media Law Court Reporting ^]../..Q../.l...W. JO. , Videojournalism for online y .„„ Production Journalism....^^/..4r:/.J.^2rr H> Sports Journalism } Business of Magazines .^iX7./..D../-i-<— tXStudents must notify the NCTJ if contact details change net * 29 NCTJ PORTFOLIO www.nctj.com ASSESSMENT SUMMARY t Candidate name: ELEMENT ^ J MARK STORY/FEATURE 1:. 1^-718 STORY/FEATURE 2:. i3>/18 STORY/FEATURE 3:. 1^18 STORY/FEATURE 4:. *r/18 STORY/FEATURE 5:. l3>/18 STORY/FEATURE 6:. l\ 718 STORY/FEATURE 7:. 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Trainee's name:...^A.M.^5....C;^r6.^.!.E>.G Publication:....M.£M£^^ Employed from:...2S./.Q^./.c^Ol.a 7r....Q&./...Q.b..J..£Q)..3.. Editor/Training officer's name:...ALICE &.E&SB.S* Jobtitle:....T±Q^I}..C^ Please rate on a scale of 1-5 (5> = Very Good, 1 = Needs Major Improvement) The trainee Trainee's work: 5 0 3 04 3 2 1 Writing 2 1 Commitment Q?) 4 3 2 1 Interviewing ( 5 ) 4 3 2 1 5 (4) 3 2 1 Output Initiative 0 4 3 2 1 Speed 5 4 3 (2) 1 (y 4 3 ©4 3 2 1 Accuracy 5 0 3 2 1 2 1 Flair 5 (T) 3 2 1 Appearance Self-discipline Team player Digital awareness Overall impression 5(jf) 3 2 1 0 4 3 2 1 Please give constructive comments about the trainee's performance. ..TcuM&s.:s.....a^ . . ^ ^ ^ .££££VLlr^.l..^^ ' "~ ' ' { '' ' msinii^.c(A .Q.vfvU cy^a.r^r foftQ2..QJA£L.: OUJpud Sf&QcL This trainee is employed by my publication. Date Editor/Training Officer signature Q&./..Qk/^Q.J.^. net 33 www.ncti.com NCTJ PORTFOLIO STORY7FEATURE 1 Stories: original copy from one real-world story is required, with the cutting or web page print-out if published or the final redrafted copy if coursework. Submissions are marked on intro, story structure, balance, writing style, quotes, legal and ethical awareness, and use of English. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Features: should be substantial enough to demonstrate the candidate's ability to source material, interview contacts, and gather facts in support of opinion. Contentious material should, where possible, present both or several views. Cuttings should carry the candidate's single byline. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Video and audio: submissions are marked on appropriateness of the subject matter and viewability/audibility. STORY7FEATURE HEADLINE (if applicable).!0^.(2X^.(2^ 2 PUBLISHED llQS^^ \ J STUDENT'S DESCRIPTION AND COMMENTS SUGGESTED ILLUSTRATIONS (if appropriate)." ^ "^" free TP) TVr ASSESSMENT [14-18 Good, 9-13 Satisfactory, 1-8 Poor, 0 Unacceptable] MARK OUT OF 18....l2~... ASSESSOR'S COMMENT ..A ^^\ju%rvoW....r>o»c..^.v.*^jc.vx^....c«^>.ww/.t;. .S^L>r>.c.i^.....<^i..v^K iCfwwi AkjJsiCvXA.^..- ASSESSOR'S NAME (please print) ASSESSOR'S SIGNATURE Ljz^%&.....1i^tr>.*Aftti... net Coursework / Court Reporting / James Garside / 26/1/12 / FINAL DRAFT Court Reporting A woman who stole food from Marks & Spencer in front of two police officers was given a three-month supervision order at Brighton Magistrates Court today. Alice Walker, 37, of Acacia Avenue, Brighton, pleaded guilty to stealing salad, vegetables and cheese worth £12 from the BP garage Marks & Spencer in Hanover Road, Brighton. John Smith, prosecuting, said Walker entered the supermarket at 11.30pm on December 22 where two police officers saw her hiding goods under her jumper before attempting to leave without paying. When apprehended by the officers she offered to pay for the food. A police search revealed she had £11.88 worth of stolen goods and £44 in cash. Mr Smith said Walker had previous convictions including 63 counts of theft, having been fined for shoplifting the day before the offence took place. Joan Harrison, defending, said Walker had been drinking while on prescription medication and, to use Walker's own words, was "out of if at the time of the offence. Mrs Harrison, citing extenuating personal circumstances, said Walker had a 17-year-old-son and had been in custody for lengthy drug addiction due to an abusive relationship. Walker was remorseful for the offence, had engaged voluntarily with social services and had remained drug free. Michael Stevens, the district judge, gave Walker credit for her guilty plea. She was given a three-months supervision order on condition of attending 10 further drug rehabilitation sessions. 35 NCTJ PORTFOLIO w w w. n c t j . c o m STORY/FEATURE 2 Stories: original copy from one real-world story is required, with the cutting or web page print-out if published or the final redrafted copy if coursework. Submissions are marked on intro, story structure, balance, writing style, quotes, legal and ethical awareness, and use of English. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Features: should be substantial enough to demonstrate the candidate's ability to source material, interview contacts, and gather facts in support of opinion. Contentious material should, where possible, present both or several views. Cuttings should carry the candidate's single byline. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Video and audio: submissions are marked on appropriateness of the subject matter and viewability/audibility. ftz&dy^v Gro-^p t rtrJ erf cwr STORY/FEATURE HEADLINE (if applicableJ.i^.TTlb^..^ PUBLISHED IN^fclie*^ <J STUDENT'S DESCRIPTION AND COMMENTS exHi6rpaN "brofr^-fxxD Bft<SrvHbr\/ mu&ELm I. P^'crsi' ecs-crfErr^-Uyok/^- ■uSIRATI0NS(ifappri >nat ^J /c3 ( ^ H / f fl T l C ^ B W r ^ K K^jmwm ASSESSMENT [14-18 Good, 9-13 Satisfactory, 1-8 Poor, 0 Unacceptable] MARK OUT OF 18.13. ASSESSOR'S COMMENT .0^. ..^\xv.>ava^.r.....<X Vi^ .e^^.vXvA..v*.r\.... ASSESSOR'S NAME (please print) ^.<^^^.<a...trA/Q^.tW.£*J^\. net ASSESSOR'S SIGNATURE m*ZT Art Exhibition Review / Goff / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT / 1 Robert Goff: An Etcher in the Wake of Whistler 29 November 2011 to 29 April 2012 Brighton Museum, Prints & Drawings Gallery Review by James Garside Japanese villagers walk heads-bowed as they pass through a Torii gate and descend to the river, where a boat waits in the shadow of Mount Fuji. The gates are painted black and vermilion and often stand at the entrance of Buddhist temples and Shinto shrines to mark the passage between the sacred and the profane. Here it also marks passing from Robert Goff s eye into history, as this one of the artist's only surviving watercolours, and the standout piece in Brighton Museum's stunning collection of his work. Robert Goff (1837-1922) travelled to Japan with the army in 1877, towards the end of his military career, and his pictures of Asia are rare. Goff is best known for the compositional and technical excellence of his etchings, but it's the muted watercolours and half-finished sketches that are the most emotive. In a rare exhibition of his work, there is a broad selection from his travels, including views of life in Venice, Florence, Holland, Japan, Switzerland, and the English coast including Brighton and Hove. Goff was a mainstay of the Brighton and Hove art scene and lived in Hove on the east side of Adelaide Crescent for almost 33 years from 1889 to1903. Art Exhibition Review / Goff / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT / 2 Goff relocated to Italy in 1903, with his second wife Clarissa, but kept his purposebuilt artist's studio on Holland Road until he died in 1922. Brighton was his favourite subject - especially sea-views of Brighton, Hove and Shoreham - and the etchings of The West Pier, Brighton Sands, and The Metropole Hotel are among his finest work. On show with his Brighton work there are famous etchings of Bethesda and Itchen Valley and several rarely displayed Tuscan studies of flowers and trees. Despite having received no professional training in his lifetime, Goffs etchings frequently draw comparison to James McNeill Whistler, who popularised the form. But like the brief outlines and smudged silhouettes of people in his pictures, the artist is worthy of more attention. The exhibition runs until the end of April. 37 NCTJ PORTFOLIO www.nctj.com STORY/FEATURE 3 Stories: original copy from one real-world story is required, with the cutting or web page print-out if published or the final redrafted copy if coursework. Submissions are marked on intra, story structure, balance, writing style, quotes, legal and ethical awareness, and use of English. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Features: should be substantial enough to demonstrate the candidate's ability to source material, interview contacts, and gather facts in support of opinion. Contentious material should, where possible, present both or several views. Cuttings should carry the candidate's single byline. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Video and audio: submissions are marked on appropriateness of the subject matter and viewability/audibility. STORY/FEATURE HEADLINE (if applicable).^!!Dd.(.C^...yIZ^Y/.T^^OPV/^ PUBLISHED IN..8#.1£Q4K^ W STUDENT'S DESCRIPTION AND COMMENTSeq^ (P/^\Q^b-tX^T\) r\}Of _ / f&z - y (?>csyi&¥^ -nso SUGGESTED ILLUSTRATIONS (if appropriate ^ ASSESSMENT [14-18 Good, 9-13 Satisfactory, 1-8 Poor, 0 Unacceptable] MARK OUT OF 18. ASSESSOR'S COMMENT JO....,.. SA .0>~k..... <w>C\ X.V^XsJLJX_dL..,. .Vrrr/^f./^OvC&.WtfL.. ..V.V.vJ.V.Wrr^ ASSESSOR'S NAME (please print) (^.SA/^^...$^rf^.^.a.TcJ net ASSESSOR'S SIGNATURE .12- Music Review / Thin Lizzy, The Dome / Brighton Noise / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT Thin Lizzy, The Dome, February 3rd' James Garside In their heyday 70s heavy metal legends Thin Lizzy played to packed-out stadiums. But the band hasn't released a studio album since 1983 (Thunder and Lightning'), split after they played their last gig in 1984, and hasn't produced any new material since the tragic death of frontman Phil Lynott, their founding member and principal songwriter, in 1986. The band has existed in various incarnations since then, mostly as a tribute to Phil Lynott and always playing the Thin Lizzy back catalogue. Almost thirty years later, the current lineup are on tour, still playing all the hits, but amid talk of recording new songs. With support from Triggerfinger and Clutch, the boys are back - it's just a question of why. TRIGGERFINGER Brighton Dome Concert Hall is the politest rock venue I've ever been to. Self-confessed 'warm-up party' Triggerfinger kicked off in grand style with an excellent blues rock set drawn in equal measure from their last three albums. Highlights included 'I'm Coming for You', 'On My Knees', 'Short Term Memory Love', and 'All This Dancin' Around.' Lead vocalist and guitarist Ruben Block was laid back and charming throughout, changing guitars after almost every song; accompanied by 'Monsieur' Paul Van Bruystegem on bass and Mario Goossens on drums (possibly the happiest drummer on the planet, not least because he got to do a drum solo). These Belgian rockers may have been described as "the loudest band in Antwerp", but what spoke loudest of all was their rapport with the audience and with each other. When the power went during 'My Baby's Got a Gun' and the emergency lights came on, they'd already won the crowd's approval, and kept going whilst everybody clapped in time over a silent guitar solo. Music Review / Thin Lizzy, The Dome / Brighton Noise / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT CLUTCH Judging by the number of their t-shirts in the crowd, you'd think that Clutch were the main event; but they made gracious special guests and took the whole thing in their stride. Known for their rabid fans and relentless touring, Clutch are often said to play more than a hundred gigs per year. Neil Fallon (vocals and guitar), Tim Suit (guitar), Dan Maines (bass), and Jean-Paul Gaster (drums), ploughed through the set, and it was heads down, no nonsense, serious business all the way. Proceedings came to a halt when an amp exploded, but unlike Triggerfinger, there was little interaction with the crowd. The frontman Neil Fallon just said his stand-up routine wasn't up to much and asked them to bear with it, before they shrugged and continued playing. Clutch started as a hardcore punk band but has always experimented, with influences ranging from stoner rock to hard-rock blues and each album getting progressively harder to describe. They're bluesy as hell right now, and it would've been great to hear more from the early albums, or at least to make room for the humour and swagger of a couple of standout tracks like 'A Shogun Named Marcus' and 'Big News I.' Clutch are a headline act in their own right, and would've benefited from a much longer set. It's clear they could have kept going the entire night. They finished with a blistering performance of 'Electric Worry' from the 2007 album 'From Beale Street to Oblivion' that had even gnarly old guard metallers shouting the chorus, so it looks like they made some new friends. If you ask the kids wrecking at the front, Clutch didn't support Thin Lizzy; it's the other way around. Music Review / Thin Lizzy, The Dome / Brighton Noise / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT THIN LIZZY After power cuts and exploding amps, the only things that went off during Thin Lizzy's set were pyrotechnics. They started appropriately enough with the raucous 'Are You Ready* (To Rock), but with a smoke machine, lasers, bright lights, and a flashing 'Thin Lizzy' sign, for all the monsters-of-rock posturing it sometimes felt like watching accomplished musicians play Guitar Hero. When it comes to putting on a show, Thin Lizzy's amp goes up to eleven. It's easy to be cynical, but far better to kick back and enjoy the party - and Brighton Dome Concert Hall was packed out with a friendly and enthusiastic crowd, determined to do just that. Ricky Warwick, former frontman of The Almighty, did a commendable job on vocals. It must be difficult to take the place of such an idolised frontman, but his powerful voice and distinct Irish lilt lends itself well to the songs, without the need for imitation. Warwick joined the Thin Lizzy family in 2010 at the behest of guitarist Scott Gorham, and has been embraced by the fans. Gorham is a mainstay of the band and in many ways has become the custodian of their legacy, having instigated the reformation and worked on the remastered Thin Lizzy back catalogue. The current lineup is completed by stalwart Thin Lizzy members Brian Downey (drums) and Darren Wharton (keyboards and backing vocals), alongside more recent recruits Marco Mendoza (bass) and Damon Johnson (guitars). What's most impressive is just how well Phil Lynott's songs have aged. Mendoza and Johnson were put to good use in a set that included 'Jailbreak', 'Bad Reputation', 'Don't Believe a Word', and 'Killer on the Loose.' The pace shifted for 'Dancing in the Moonlight', then 'Massacre' and 'Angel of Death.' It was genuinely touching to see Music Review / Thin Lizzy, The Dome / Brighton Noise / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT couples dance to 'Still in Love With You', and when 'Whiskey in the Jar' followed I sang my heart out along with everybody else. 'Sha La La', 'Suicide', 'Waiting for an Alibi', and 'Cowboy Song' also did the rounds, and when foil confetti rained down on the crowd during 'The Boys Are Back in Town' it looked like the party was over. But Jack Moore made a very special guest appearance for the encore, and played a stirring rendition of 'Emerald' dedicated to the memory of his father and Phil Lynott. Gary Moore, a legendary musician and longtime guitarist with the band, sadly died in February 2011. The evening ended with a cover of Bob Seger's 'Rosalie' and the epic 'Black Rose.' You can't help wondering what could have been. Had Phil Lynott lived and the band stayed together, they'd probably have changed to the point of being unrecognisable now. The current lineup gives a solid Thin Lizzy performance, but there's so little left of the original band that you'd be forgiven for hoping that if they do record new material, it's under a different name. Still, it's hard to argue with a concert hall full of devoted Thin Lizzy fans; and they'd probably kick the shit out of you if you did. Thin Lizzy may be a tribute act, but they're a fitting tribute nonetheless. Few bands are more deserving of their place in rock history, and it's a testament to Phil Lynott's songwriting that the band and the fans have kept his memory alive this long. For one night, Brighton was Phil's town - it's just a pity he wasn't there to see it. 39 NCTJ PORTFOLIO www.nctj.com STORY/FEATURE 4 Stories: original copy from one real-world story is required, with the cutting or web page print-out if published or the final redrafted copy if coursework. Submissions are marked on intra, story structure, balance, writing style, quotes, legal and ethical awareness, and use of English. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Features: should be substantial enough to demonstrate the candidate's ability to source material, interview contacts, and gather facts in support of opinion. Contentious material should, where possible, present both or several views. Cuttings should carry the candidate's single byline. 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T \ net ASSESSOR'S SIGNATURE Blog Post / Nanowrimo / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT/ 01/04/2012 1 Nanowrimo Boot Camp - a quick and dirty guide to surviving national novel writing month for lazy writers James Garside It's nanowrimo again - the time of the year when all common sense goes out of the window and you try to write a novel in a month. Just for kicks. Nanowrimo is great fun but it isn't for the squeamish. If you're serious about completing nanowrimo then you shouldn't be reading this but, for what it's worth, this is the method that works for me. Here are some quick tips and dirty tricks to help get you through the month. Do the Math 50,000 words in a month. That's only 1667 words per day - you can do that in an hour if you leave your inner editor at the door. You're not "writing a novel", you're writing 50,000 words. Don't panic at the thought of writing so much; break it down into manageable chunks. A great novel is something written by Dostoevsky. A nanowrimo novel is just 50,000 words. THAT'S ALL. Are you a Tortoise or a Bunny? Slow and steady wins the race, but hard and fast is also fun. Best not get hung up about this. You're writing a novel, not having an orgasm. Aim to write 2,000 words per day as quickly as you can. If you want to polish and refine them throughout the day, knock yourself out. But once you've got your words done for the day, you're clear. How you go about it and what you do afterwards is up to you. Blog Post / Nanowrimo / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT / 01/04/2012 2 Think Slowly, Type Quickly Set your watch. Try to write 2,000 words in an hour without stopping. It's the most fun you can have in an hour - short of drugs or fucking. Sit down and knock them out so fast that you don't have time to think, edit or fuss over what you're writing. Don't stop until your time is up. Spend rest of the day scribbling notes and getting ready for your next session. If it takes you all day to hit 2,000 words, TYPE FASTER. Want to Increase Your Word Count? Lower Your Standards! If you throw enough shit against the wall some of it will stick. These are words to live by if you're a writer, or a monkey, and you have shit. Don't press delete until December. If you write it wrong, just write it right next time. Pile them up. 'Don't get it right, get it written.' No-one has to read your novel. Not even you. Take chances. Do something random. It's ok to be crazy, absurd and fun - but screw literature. Lost the Plot? Don't get hung up on plot. You're just making a fix-up novel out of bits and pieces. You don't even have to write them in the right order. Grab your story by the throat. Write whatever scares or excites you the most. Any time you think, "I can't say that", put it in. Keep your eye on the prize. You get across a pebbled beach fast if you focus on the sea, as you run, not by worrying about your poor feet. Blog Post / Nanowrimo / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT / 01/04/2012 3 Take Out' Your Inner Editor Your mind will come up with a billion excuses to stop writing and seductive things you could do instead. Whatever it says, it's full of shit. Ignore it. Write anyway. If your inner editor gets in the way, write down what it says. Turn it into a character with a high squeaky voice and pink fluffy ears. Shoot it in the head. LAUGH! Then take it out to dinner. Promise to spend December, red pen in hand, demolishing your novel. Do Your Time Like a Good Peon If one day in a fit of madness you write 20,000 words - that's great, but the very next day, you go back to writing 2,000 words. No days off. If you don't have an hour, do it in 15-minute chunks. But at the very least put in your set minimum every day. Tell yourself whatever lies are necessary to keep your butt in the chair and you writing. Don't Obsess About What Pen You Should Use Use whatever writing tools are to hand. I need three things: tea, a notebook, and an Alphasmart NEO. Tea's essential, notebooks don't die when you spill tea on them, and the trusty NEO is where I write a shitty first draft. If you don't know why tea is important, you're dead to me. You Can't Edit A Blank Page The notebook is your friend. Scribble your surface anxiety in the notebook, all the mad stuff crowding your head. Include ideas for future scenes, lines of dialogue, botched first attempts, anything that might belong in the novel later but is in the way of what you need to write right now. That way you've already overcome the blank page before you sit down to write. Use them as a starting point for your next session. Blog Post / Nanowrimo / James Garside / FINAL DRAFT / 01/04/2012 4 Malfunction! Need Input! Not sure what to write? Allow random input to decide. Write down your dreams, shuffle oblique strategies cards, roll dice, or pull in people and events from the world around you. Whatever comes up -just trust it and go with it. Write in silence. It's hard for your muse to whisper in your ear if you've got headphones on. Write offline. Avoid the nanowrimo forums until you're done writing. Get your virtual hugs later. Back Up Your Work I know you're smart enough to do this, but writing 50,000 words from scratch sucks, so backup to the point of paranoia and madness. I backup my NEO using Alphasync to Dropbox. Keep a separate master document - a text file of your novel - to submit to nanowrimo when you verify your wordcount. Make multiple backups. Losing your work when some smug ass has already told you to backup is less fun than rewriting. Back Up Your Sense of Humour Check your funny fuse. Give your novel a title that makes you laugh. I once called mine 'Fuck You Inner Editor!' Bludgeon to death anyone that tries to stop you writing, with your novel, but only once you've verified your wordcount. Nanowrimo's meant to be fun. Who cares if the end product is a bit shitty? It's compost. Look through it for green shoots in December. It could hold the start of something wonderful. 41 NCTJ PORTFOLIO www.nctj.com STORY/FEATURE 5 Stories: original copy from one real-world story is required, with the cutting or web page print-out if published or the final redrafted copy if coursework. Submissions are marked on intra, story structure, balance, writing style, quotes, legal and ethical awareness, and use of English. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. Features: should be substantial enough to demonstrate the candidate's ability to source material, interview contacts, and gather facts in support of opinion. Contentious material should, where possible, present both or several views. Cuttings should carry the candidate's single byline. Evidence of initiative in sourcing the story will also be rewarded. 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ASSESSOR'S COMMENT A .^rx>.c£*~l>.!-*.£.w3.? .>£s^c.<s^w0^....s^.c.dk-KJU<v.. .:A^..\/r^.../&^....U>^^f.>*l\J^£..~ ASSESSOR'S NAME (please print) L^s^^..:x\£te^:frl1 net ASSESSOR'S SIGNATURE kSMagazine Feature / Interview with Toby King / By James Garside / 1 INTERVIEW: 'King Tobes' always gets final cut James Garside meets Toby King, programmer of The Duke's After Dark at Brighton's Duke of York's Picturehouse and unabashed cult film fanatic Duke of York's Picturehouse have ditched trailers and adverts in favour of showing short films from local filmmakers before late-night screenings of cult classics in The Duke's After Dark. The move gains much needed exposure for independent and student filmmakers and introduces their work to an appreciative audience. James Garside interviewed Toby King, 'King Tobes' to his friends, to find out which short films made the cut and his plans for The Duke's After Dark. Tell us a little about yourself and how you got started with Duke of York's Picturehouse and specifically Duke's After Dark. I started working at The Duke's just over 2 years ago, because I needed a job and I liked movies. One of my favourite aspects of the Duke's was its relatively diverse programming, which included late night screenings of cult classics. However the attendance for these shows was often quite low, as there wasn't much specific marketing for them. In the summer of 2010 (I think) we screened 'Sex and the City 2' for two weeks straight (it was a quiet time for arthouse/indie films). We were actually really busy for the first week, which I found surprising, as the film was terrible. Even the huge audiences thought so. Magazine Feature / Interview with Toby King / By James Garside / 2 Around this time there was a lot of buzz around a certain horror movie called 'The Human Centipede.' I thought if a terrible film like SATC2 can sell out for a week, then surely an appalling trendy horror movie could as well. So I took to Facebook and set a group to generate interest in showing The Human Centipede. Over 700 people joined it, and so our manager and programmer agreed to put it on (I think this was the first screening of the film in UK outside of Horror Film festivals). Sure enough it sold out and was a huge success for us. After I did a marketing internship at Picturehouse head office at the start of 2011,1 was allocated a bi-monthly late night slot at the Duke's. Myself and one of the Picturehouse's design team, Tim Willis, came on board. We chose the films, he designed the posters/flyers and I dealt with the marketing and promo. Our first show in the summer of 2011 was THE LOST BOYS. It wasn't a sell out, but we shifted over 150 tickets, then followed JAWS which sold better, then screenings of ALIENS and PULP FICTION both of which sold out. How would you describe The Duke's After Dark to someone who's never been before? What should they expect? Firstly The Duke's After Dark is all about seeing a great film in a cinema with a great crowd. This is the simplest and most important part of the whole thing. For me these simplest of things don't exist in modern cinema-going. Multiplexes are grim, bland places often half empty and fail to capture or harness whatever vibe the film you're watching is giving off. The Duke of York's is a very special kind of cinema because you actually get a cinema experience, even small aspects like the building, or simply being able to buy a beer (or slice of cake) makes it more personal or memorable. At The Duke's After Dark it's about capturing the uniqueness of the Duke's as a venue, but also being a bit more laid back, a bit more rowdy. The films we program are to be watched with a lively crowd. Cheering, booing, laughing, applauding are strongly encouraged. As we screen films that most of the audiences have seen numerous times and know scene for scene what's coming. When we screened JAWS I don't think there was anyone in the house that didn't quote out loud, "We're gonna need a bigger boat!" Magazine Feature / Interview with Toby King / By James Garside / 3 How long has The Duke's After Dark been going and what kind of response have you received? So yeah, it stared first with THE HUMAN CENTIPEDE and a screening of JURASSIC PARK in early 2011, but its only really been The Duke's After Dark since THE LOST BOYS show last summer. The response has been fantastic, each show has sold really well and two have sold out. It's kinda scary because the bar has been set high now. But it's very rewarding knowing that there is a market for this kind of late night cinema. It's great that people still want to see these films on a big screen with a crowd when they could easily pirate them off the internet and watch them alone in bed. What gave you the idea to put short films on before the main feature and what do you hope to achieve through this? The short film idea came from a conversation with one of Picturehouse cinema's programmers, and it was a great idea. Anyone can make a short film now, but most of these will only live on YouTube. So it's nice to be able to get someone's work up there on a massive screen in front of a real life crowd. It's also a nod back to old days when cinema used to screen shorts before films instead of twenty minutes of car adverts. What do you think of short film as a medium or art form? Short films are a tricky one. I've seen a lot and there are millions out there. It is potentially a great art form. I mostly see it as a playground for creative types to flex their muscles and try stuff out. I think it's great because there are literally no rules to short films. You aren't catering to anyone's expectations, so you can do exactly what you want to do, and the technology is out there for everyone to have a go. Which independent filmmakers and short films have you screened so far and what has the response been like from the audience or the filmmakers themselves? The first one was by my colleagues Jonathan Hyde and Abi Toll and was a music video from Esben and the Witch. It was a great video that complemented the music and the film screening itself perfectly. Magazine Feature / Interview with Toby King / By James Garside / 4 I made a terrible little video to screen before JAWS, which was basically me and some friends doing stupid stuff in the sea on the beach. It got a few laughs and suited being screened before JAWS. A friend of one of the projectionists supplied a weird little short for the ALIENS screening; it was an entry into the Straight 8 competition. I still don't really know what it was about, but it was called MOON EGG and looked real cool. For PULP FICTION me and my friend (and local photographer) Sam Hiscox made a film inspired by Godard's famous quote, 'all you need to make a movie is a girl and gun.' It's called KASIA KASANOVA; it's pretty great even if I say so myself. We shot on a Wednesday night, edited it Thursday and Friday and screened it at Duke's After Dark on Saturday. I was also lucky enough to get a trailer for a series of pulp books from Pulp Press; a local publishing company who in specialise in contemporary pulp fiction. This trailer was made by Kevin Mason at Create Studios in Brighton. I'm hoping to get more of their work shown here too. The incredible TINY DANCER screened before THE WARRIORS was another creation of Sam Hiscox and Matt Martin (who also works at Create Studios). There is a twenty minute edit of it somewhere; but like his dancing, I'm not sure the world is ready for that yet. If and when the follow up comes out The Duke's After Dark will have it first. The audience seems to really like all the shorts we've shown; all get a good response. All the filmmakers seem to enjoy seeing their work in a way that's completely different from seeing it on the computer. Hopefully one day the next Tarantino can be traced back to The Duke's After Dark. What sets Duke of York's Picturehouse apart from the multiplexes, and how do you compete with them? Simply, we show better films and have better staff (because we are encouraged to be -1 don't want to knock anyone at the Odeon, I'm sure they're good people too). Because the Duke's is such a unique building and cinema in this day and age, I think people get more of a vibe when coming here. Magazine Feature / Interview with Toby King / By James Garside / 5 Multiplexes are soulless and dry places; filmmaker Steve McQueen recently said modern cinemas are like gyms. It's a bit like Guerrilla warfare. We use the big bad enemy's weakness to our advantage. And I'm sure being able to get a beer at the Duke's helps too. What can independent and local cinemas do to stay relevant in the digital age? What can people get from Duke of York's that they can't get at home? Well, we are digital too, we have digital projector and server, we have 3D (we still have the 35mm stuff too). As long as films are made cinemas will be there to show them. Home entertainment is incredible nowadays, but it will never ever compare to the cinema. I think this is something that local cinemas need to remind people of. Cinemas and the films have the potential to really have an affect on people. I mean we sold out a screening of PULP FICTION. Nearly everyone I know has it on DVD, it's probably illegally available on YouTube, it was on TV a few days before we screened it and it still sold out. Sure marketing and word of mouth were essential to this success, but people wouldn't come if they didn't love the film and love the idea of seeing it in the cinema. I think what cinemas have to do is make that 'cinema idea' a reality again. What are the highlights of your upcoming schedule? What's next for you or your plans for Duke's After Dark? The Duke's After Dark will still be happening bi-monthly (and the next one will be FIGHT CLUB on the 2nd March), but it's kind of merging with all the other late night shows and special events coming up at the Duke's. Hopefully this will involve having short films shown before every late night show, and possibly getting special guests and experts in to introduce and talk about the films too. We're also very excited about the screening of David Lynch's MULHOLLAND DRIVE on the 24th February. I'm working on something with The Green Door store (a music venue beneath Brighton Train Station). But I can't confirm anything yet. We should be having a skate movie made by some local skaters coming up in the summer too. I'm also looking into screening films in other venues, kind of like a Secret Cinema thing except this will be no secret; people will know what's happening. But it's very early days yet, so I'll say no more. Magazine Feature / Interview with Toby King / By James Garside / 6 FACTFILE The Duke's opened in 1910, is the UK's oldest operating cinema, and has shown films for over 100 years. The Grade II listed building was a purpose-built Picture Palace and is famous for its Edwardian architecture. The cinema has digital and 35mm projectors, sofa seats in the balcony, and a fully licensed bar. The Duke's is a mainstay of the Brighton film festival CineCity and also a venue for all night movie marathons and live music events. Duke of York's Picturehouse, Preston Circus, Brighton. 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The 12-page Brighton Declaration that lays out the reforms (and is of course named after Brighton) could impact upon the furtherance of Human Rights issues for years to come. The local angle of 'what this means for Brighton' will be used as an entry point to the much bigger story of what this means for the future of the European Court of Human Rights. All 47 member countries have previously voted unanimously on the need for reform to deal with the Court's burgeoning caseload, at the Interlaken and Izmir conferences, but have yet to agree on a way forward. The preview of the conference enables a timely discussion of these issues and the case for a UK Bill of Rights. This is very much a human interest story as it will have far reaching consequences for the access of individuals to the court, such as in countries with poor human rights records. Local interviews will tie it back to Brighton. The fact that Brighton Centre was previously host to the Eurovision song contest (arguably the last key European decision made in Brighton) could be used as a counterpoint to lighten the tone. Publishing format Print/radio/online/ video In print and online. Online would have link to audio of David Cameron's speech to the Court in Strasbourg on January 2012 which set the agenda for reform at start of UK's 6 months chair of Council of Europe. What sources will you use to research your feature and who will you interview? I will interview / speak with a Brighton MEP, a Human Rights lecturer at Sussex Uni, and key representatives of Brighton Council, Council of Europe, and Human Rights organisations such as Amnesty International. I'll also try to contact Sussex Police and the Brighton Centre to research what preparations were made for the event. I declare this represents my own work and all primary and secondary sources have been acknowledged. 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Representatives of the 47 member states of the Council of Europe will ratify a package of reforms to the Court as detailed in the Brighton Declaration. The Conference follows the Izmir and Interlaken conferences in Turkey and Switzerland where member states voted unanimously for reforms to streamline the Court and reduce its backlog of over 150,000 cases. Rebecca Edwards, Brighton Centre, said: "The event is very important to the Brighton Centre and it is an honour to welcome the Council of Europe to our venue and city." Tourism and industry in the city will benefit from delegates frequenting local restaurants and cafes when not in conference, staying in local hotels and using major attractions such as Brighton Museum, The Royal Pavilion and Brighton Pier for social events. Simon Ellery, a Brighton & Hove City Council spokesperson, said: "The Council of Europe Conference is a highly prestigious event that is estimated to be worth more than £1 million to the city in spending and global exposure. The publicity around this event and the Brighton Declaration itself helps strengthen Brighton & Hove's credentials as a leading conference city across Europe." James Garside / PA Feature / Final Draft 2 Prime Minister David Cameron prioritised reform of the European Court of Human Rights when he addressed the Parliamentary Assembly of the Council of Europe in Strasbourg in January. Cameron said: "The Court should be free to deal with the most serious violations of human rights. It should not be swamped with an endless backlog of cases. The Court should ensure that the right to individual petition counts, but it should not act as a small claims court." The Brighton conference is the signature event in the UK's chairmanship of the Council of Europe, before it hands over to Albania in May, but Cameron won't be in attendance. In January the Court overturned the British government's ban on prisoner voting and halted the extradition of radical Islamist cleric Abu Qatada to Jordan on terror charges. Leading human rights organisations including Amnesty International claim Cameron wants to see reform in order to chastise the Court and stop it interfering with UK policy. Tara Lyle, Policy Adviser at Amnesty International UK, said: "It is clear that the British government are thinking exclusively of the decisions which have gone against them and are lashing out to prevent the Court from further perceived interference." Cameron may want the Court cut off at the knees over Abu Qatada, or slights against Parliamentary Sovereignty and the Rule of Law, but pressure groups hold him to account. James Garside / PA Feature / Final Draft 3 Amnesty International recognised the need for reforms outlined in the Brighton Declaration but criticised the lack of consultation over the document and the exclusion of civil society from the conference. Cathie Burton, a spokesperson for the Council of Europe, said: "The conference is a ministerial conference, so it would not be the appropriate arena. However, many representatives of civil society have been involved in the debates on reform of the court, and we welcome their input." The Brighton Declaration includes proposals to write the principles of 'subsidiarity' and 'margin of appreciation' into the European Convention on Human Rights. This would mean more cases were decided at a national level, instead of being heard by the Court, and allow states greater freedom to decide how to apply the Convention. Other proposals intended to reduce the Court's workload include tightening admissibility criteria for cases and reducing the six-month time limit in which applications can be brought. Prof. Marie Dembour, a Human Rights Lecturer at Sussex University and part of a group of Sussex Law academics that scrutinised the final draft, said: "A lot was geared at being able to say to the British electorate the government was doing something rather than proposing reforms with a chance of passing at European level." A draft of the Brighton Declaration was leaked to the public in March and watered down in subsequent revisions to the point where some opponents dismissed it as a washout. James Garside / PA Feature / Final Draft 4 Nigel Farage, UKIP Leader and MEP, said: "Looking through the provisions, I fail to find anything very significant. In general the Court grinds on as before, eroding the authority of democratically accountable governments and augmenting the authority of democratically unaccountable bodies." Media coverage before the conference has played upon fears of Europe 'telling Brits what to do' but such critics have been accused of having their heads buried in the sand. Britain makes up only 2.4% of the Court's cases, few UK cases are ever overturned, and the UK has made a positive contribution as chair of the Council of Europe. Cathie Burton, a spokesperson for the Council of Europe, said: "Reform of the court was the most prominent element of the UK chairmanship, but there were many other very positive results. Britain championed the rights of Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual and Transsexual people, organising the first conference of its type bringing together countries from different parts of Europe. It also worked hard to promote regional and local democracy." Political posturing aside activists and politicians agree that human rights are sacrosanct and the chair of the Council of Europe should act in the best interests of all member states. David Cameron said: "We are not, and never will be, a country that walks on by while human rights are trampled into the dust. This has a lot to do with Britain's national character-a love of freedom, an instinctive loathing of overmighty authority - but it is also about our national interest: to live, to travel, to trade in a more open and secure world." James Garside / PA Feature / Final Draft 5 The High Level Conference is a watershed moment for the Court, and a landmark event for Brighton, but it's important that human rights don't get left on the beach. [1000 words, for immediate use, publication in print] PULL QUOTES "It is an honour to welcome the Council of Europe to our city" "Event worth more than £1 million to the city in spending and global exposure" "Britain worked hard to promote regional and local democracy" PICTURES A partially collapsed sandcastle with a Council of Europe /UK flag Secretary Ken Clarke on Brighton beach, shirt sleeves rolled up Shots of delegates with Brighton Pier or The Brighton Centre in view TIMELINE OF KEY AGREEMENTS 5 MAY 1949 Council of Europe founded by Treaty of London 3 SEPTEMBER 1953 European Convention on Human Rights ratified 21 JANUARY 1959 European Court of Human Rights established under Article 19 1 NOVEMBER 1998 European Commission of Human Rights abolished under Protocol 11 18 FEBRUARY 2010 Russia ratified Protocol 14 for the Protection of Human Rights 18-19 FEBRUARY 2010 Interlaken Conference, Switzerland on future of the Court of Human Rights 26-27 APRIL 2011 Izmir Conference, Turkey - 'Izmir Declaration' adopted by Council of Europe 18-21 ARPIL 2012 Brighton Declaration to be ratified at High Level Conference James Garside / PA Feature / Final Draft 6 FACT FILE ON THE COUNCIL OF EUROPE The Council of Europe promotes cooperation between all European countries in democratic development, the rule of law and the furtherance of human rights. Founded in 1949 in the aftermath of World War II, the Council of Europe has 47 member states with over 800 million citizens. Although they share the same flag and anthem the Council of Europe is separate from the European Union and cannot pass binding laws. All members must adhere to the European Convention on Human Rights, including the right to life, liberty, security, fair trial, freedom of expression, and the prohibition of slavery and torture. The council oversees the European Court of Human Rights, which reviews human rights cases brought against member states and enforces the European Convention on Human Rights. FACT FILE ON THE EUROPEAN COURT OF HUMAN RIGHTS The Court protects the human rights of European citizens as established in the European Convention on Human Rights. The European Court of Human Rights is separate to the European Court of Justice, the European Union's highest court, whose remit is European Union law. The Court, based in Strasbourg, has changed the landscape across Europe and improved standards in many areas including civil liberties and political freedoms. The court considers cases brought against member countries, which are bound by the European Convention on Human Rights. In the UK the Court has upheld the right to privacy, defended the right of journalists to write stories in the national interest, and championed reform of the laws on homosexuality. Internationally, the Court has dealt with serious human rights violations including discrimination, mistreatment of prisoners, torture and abuse. Member countries are expected to comply with the Court's verdicts, although this isn't enforceable by the Court.