Einladungen zu Feiern – ink. Mustereinladung Haueinweihung
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Einladungen zu Feiern – ink. Mustereinladung Haueinweihung
www.english-work.com Dossier: Einladungen zu Feiern – ink. Mustereinladung Haueinweihung Einladungen zu privaten Feiern – für Sie kein Problem! Wenn Sie für Ihren Chef eine Einladung an englischsprachige Geschäftspartner schreiben sollen – und er Ihnen keinen Anhaltspunkt gibt, wie er es gerne hätte –, stehen Sie vor einen Dilemma: Sie wissen nicht, was im Heimatland Ihrer „Zielperson“ so üblich ist. Wir helfen Ihnen aus der Klemme. Die Lösung ist ganz einfach: Da es sich um ein (halb-)privates Schreiben handelt, gibt es keine Formvorschriften. Das heißt, dass Sie bei der Gestaltung alle Freiheiten haben. Allerdings sind zu viele Freiheiten auch wieder ein Hemmschuh für Ihre Kreativität, deshalb unser Tipp: Zauberwort Angemessenheit! Sie können sich für die nötige Angemessenheit Ihrer Einladung wie im Deutschen an drei Dingen orientieren: 1. am Anlass, 2. an der Person des oder der Einladenden, 3. an der Person des Einzuladenden. Maureen Brown und Jennifer Hohensteiner geben Ihnen Tipps zum britischem und amerikanischem Englisch. Maureen Brown ist in London aufgewachsen und hat viele Jahre als Assistentin im Management eines führenden Unternehmens gearbeitet. Heute ist sie für die Bezirktsregierung in Surrey, Südengland, aktiv. Jennifer Hohensteiners Herkunft ist die USA. Sie erwarb den Master’s Degree in Poitical Science und lebt seit 1990 in Deutschland. Langjährige Berufserfahrung als Fremdsprachensekretärin, Wirtschaftübersetzerin und Trainerin für Business Englisch zeichnen Sie aus. Der Anlass The occasion for your invitation can require different degrees of formality. Exercise Appropriateness: Can you find the appropriate tone or level of formality for the following invitations? Bestell-Hotline Wir freuen uns auf Ihren Anruf unter 089/20603180 Erreichbar Mo.-Fr. zwischen 9.00 und 18.00 Uhr Bestellung per eMail: service@gwi.de Choose among: - serious - light-hearted - funny Bestellung per Fax: 089/23110350 1 - conservative easygoing innovative Occasion wedding wedding anniversary company anniversary birthday house warming party barbeque thanksgiving dinner Tone of invitation Answer key see below. Answer key to Exercise Appropriateness: Occasion wedding wedding anniversary company anniversary birthday house warming party barbeque thanksgiving dinner Tone of invitation serious, conservative serious, funny conservative light-hearted, funny, innovative easygoing, funny, innovative easygoing, innovative conservative, lighthearted If you found it hard to make up your mind on this exercise, that is good. The logic for this exercise was to show you that it is not the occasion alone which determines the tone. Graduelle Unterschiede Nevertheless, you can be sure that in general a wedding is more formal than a barbeque and a thanksgiving dinner more conservative than a birthday party. But apart from that, two more factors play a role, making the solution to this exercise kind of arbitrary if they are not taken into consideration. Die Persönlichkeit des Einladenden If your boss is a young and innovative person, he or she might even celebrate more formal events like a wedding in an innovative way, maybe as an open-air party or a boat trip. If he is more conservative, he might decide to make his birthday party a formal buffet reception with classical music or similar... Peinlichkeiten vermeiden Either way it would not be what people might expect. In order to 2 spare them any embarrassment, it would be your task to tell them in your invitation what to wear (in the case of the reception it may be semi-formal). Dress Code Code formal semi-formal/informal (after 6 pm) semi-formal/informal (during the day) business formal dressy casual casual Women cocktail long dress or evening separates cocktail dress Men tuxedo / dinner jacket short dress or trouser suit skirt suit (not sexy), hosiery, pumps (closed toe/heel) dressy pants, no jeans, casual top anything goes dark suit + dark tie suit & tie dark suit, shirt, tie casual trousers, sports jacket, shirt (no tie) anything goes You can mention the dress code in the invitation, e.g. after a wedding: Formal reception is to follow. Der Einzuladende When planning invitations for a bigger, more formal event, such as a wedding, you will design just one sort of invitation with maybe a separate card for an evening reception, as shown in the example above. This should be printed by a professional print shop to ensure the best quality. This means you can only vaguely address a target group and hope that it meets everybody’s taste. Your English guest will require a separate invitation on such special and on any other occasion as well. This gives you the opportunity to take his or her personality into account, too. If your addressee is known to be very easygoing, you may take up this tone. And if you are not sure if he or she will know what to wear at a German wedding, you can add: Formal reception (only groom and best men will wear tuxedos) This will make his or her decision whether to accept your invitation a lot easier as you point out what can be expected. 3 Einladung Hauseinweihung Our second example for invitations is the house-warming party. (It could be a birthday party as well.) The occasion is not too serious – apart from the fact houses will cost an arm and a leg – and therefore you have no restrictions in creating the invitation. Only the personality of the invitee, e.g. your boss, is relevant. You can find a large selection of cards with funny pictures and slogans on the internet, but these are for less creative people than you. What you need is a hook to get the readers’ attention. Der Aufhänger Again it depends on what your boss intends by the invitation, what is most important to them: - Is it the occasion itself? (getting a new house) - Is it the kind of party? (barbeque) - is it an expectation from the guests? (costume party) - is it a message for others? (my new life …) When you have discovered the hook, you can look for something to illustrate it. This can be for example: - a picture a photograph a quote a personal anecdote Die besten Quellen für Aufhänger - private photo collection - private story collection (as assistant you know your boss) - internet photo collections (search machines) - quote collections (internet + book shop) e.g.: http://www.quotationspage.com/ http://www.quoteland.com/ http://www.brainyquote.com/ http://www.wisdomquotes.com/ - joke collections (internet or books) e.g.: http://www.comedycentral.com/jokes/index.jhtml http://www.ahajokes.com/ http://www.jokes2go.com/ http://www.jokes.org.au/ Whether you choose a photo of your boss as a kid happily building a sand castle or take a quote from a famous person depends on your boss’ taste. It’s your task to find the appropriate items. 4 Zitate Quotes are the favourite as they have many advantages: - quotes are common knowledge, you/your boss can use the voice of a famous person, a quote seems more objective than your own opinion, you will find quotes for any occasion and in every possible tone. Mustereinladung Hauseinweihung “I ALWAYS THOUGHT A YARD WAS THREE FEET, THEN I STARTED MOWING THE LAWN. “ C. E. COWMAN Dear friends, we have moved to the countryside and would like to celebrate this step with you. Please join us at a BBQ on May 15th, 7 pm, to find out how big 800 square yards really is! You don’t have to bring your lawn mower, just your partner and high spirits. Our new address: ………… Please call us by April 30th to say that you’re coming. Phone: ………. Please bear in mind: You can use this small guideline for all sorts of invitations, no matter what tone is preferred and appropriate for the occasion, the sender and the addressee. 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